Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., 'take pictures', 'when I get a chance').

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I always photograph mountain sunsets and rivers because they capture the mood of a place, and I usually use my phone since it's convenient.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear preference statement, then give specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid vague phrases like 'different sceneries.' Keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a small town surrounded by mountains. For example, I enjoy hiking local trails and watching sunrise over the hills because it feels peaceful and natural.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then explain briefly with a reason and an example. Correct small errors and remove repetition (e.g., 'so so far'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your point clearer.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the culture and landscapes well. For example, I have visited many places in Nepal and enjoy the variety from mountain panoramas to terraced fields, which feel familiar and meaningful to me.

× 'while I get a chance to views or see some of my favorite scenery,'

✓ 'while I get a chance to view or see some of my favorite scenery,'

'Views' is a plural noun but the verb phrase 'get a chance to' requires the base form of the verb that follows (infinitive without to when followed by 'to' as part of 'chance to' pattern). Using "views" (a noun) here is incorrect. Replace 'views' with the verb 'view' to match the structure: "get a chance to view". This fixes number and word-form mismatch. Suggestion: use 'view' after 'get a chance to' or rephrase as 'see'.

× 'in my cameras or mobile devices.'

✓ 'on my camera or mobile device.'

'Cameras' and 'devices' are plural here but the student refers to their own single camera or mobile device. Also the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to photos stored on a device. Use singular 'camera' or 'mobile device' if referring to personal items, or keep plural consistently if meaning multiple devices. Suggestion: choose correct number and use 'on' for storing/viewing pictures.

× 'So yeah, I do like taking pic.'

✓ 'So yeah, I do like taking pictures.'

'Pic' is an informal, clipped form and the sentence lacks the plural noun 'pictures.' This is a sentence structure and lexical choice issue. Use the full plural noun 'pictures' to be grammatically correct and clearer.

× 'I was born and brought up in a small town of Bizarre which is surrounded by several mountains and hills.'

✓ 'I was born and brought up in a small town called Bizarre, which is surrounded by several mountains and hills.'

The original sentence needs a clearer noun phrase: use 'called Bizarre' rather than 'of Bizarre.' Also add a comma before the non-restrictive relative clause 'which is surrounded...' The main verbs 'was born and brought up' are past and correct for background, but the phrasing required adjustment.

× 'So growing up as a child I've always loved those mountains or hiking or maybe enjoying different sceneries.'

✓ 'So while growing up I always loved those mountains, hiking, and enjoying different scenery.'

Mixed tenses and awkward conjunctions: 'I've always loved' (present perfect) with 'growing up as a child' is awkward; use simple past or present perfect consistently. Also 'sceneries' is rarely plural in English—use 'scenery.' Replace 'or' with commas and 'and' to list activities. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use 'scenery' as uncountable noun.

× 'To be honest, I haven't travelled any other countries except Nepal, so so far I've travelled quite a lot of places and I've pretty much enjoyed the views of the places where I have travelled.'

✓ 'To be honest, I haven't traveled to any other country except Nepal, so so far I've traveled to quite a lot of places and I've pretty much enjoyed the views where I traveled.'

Incorrect preposition and number: after 'traveled' use 'to' + country and 'any other country' (singular) or 'any other countries' with different verb form. Also American spelling 'traveled' vs British 'travelled'—either is acceptable but be consistent. Repetition of 'places' and 'where I have travelled' is wordy; streamline to 'places' with 'traveled to' and 'the views where I traveled.' Suggestion: use 'traveled to' and correct singular/plural and reduce redundancy.

× 'Do you like taking pictures of different views?'

✓ 'Do you like taking pictures of different views?'

'Of' is acceptable here; no change needed.'