Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and pronunciation errors, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I have been everywhere' → 'I have travelled a lot', 'take a pictures' → 'take pictures') and replace vague phrases like 'different fears' with the intended word (e.g., 'scenes' or 'places').

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I travel to many places to capture landscapes because photos help me preserve special memories; for example, I photographed a sunrise at the coast last month which still reminds me of that trip.

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and avoid filler words (umm, uh). Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with a linking word. Use accurate vocabulary ('urban views' instead of 'urban viewers') and precise adjectives ('majestic' instead of 'fairy or magnificent').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because nature feels more varied and peaceful; for instance, I enjoy photographing misty fields and forests which offer more dramatic colours and textures than cityscapes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, avoid repetition, and correct word choice ('scenes' or 'landscapes' instead of 'fears'). Provide a specific example or comparison and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Maintain neutral tone when comparing countries.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural scenes; for example, I enjoyed photographing terraced rice fields in Vietnam last year, which were very different from the landscapes at home.

× Yes I do. I'm crazy about taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I am. I'm crazy about taking pictures.

Punctuation and contraction consistency: 'Yes I do.' is not grammatically wrong but sounds unnatural after the question; 'Yes, I am.' matches 'Do you like...' when followed by 'I'm crazy about...'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation. Suggestion: respond 'Yes, I am.' then keep 'I'm crazy about taking pictures.'

× Actually I went everywhere to take a pictures.

✓ Actually, I went everywhere to take pictures.

Singular and article error: 'a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun. Remove the article 'a' to use plural 'pictures'. Add a comma after 'Actually'. Suggestion: 'I went everywhere to take pictures.'

× I think it can keep a better better beautiful memories forever.

✓ I think it can keep better, more beautiful memories forever.

Redundancy and adjective order: 'better better beautiful' is repetitive and incorrect. Use comparative 'more beautiful' for decoration and 'better' is vague; combine as 'better, more beautiful memories'. 'Memories' is plural so no article. Also place adjectives before noun and separate ideas with a comma. Suggestion: 'better, more beautiful memories.'

× So that's why I take a lot of pictures and the for different fears is like a symbol.

✓ So that's why I take a lot of pictures; for me, different views are like symbols.

Multiple errors: 'the for different fears' is incorrect word choice and order. 'Fears' should be 'views'. 'the for' is meaningless; rephrase 'for me' to show personal perspective. Also 'is like a symbol' must agree in number: 'views' take plural verb 'are' and 'symbols' plural. Suggestion: 'for me, different views are like symbols.'

× I'd say I prefer the rural areas cause, umm, urban, uh, viewers, I think it's normal and uh, all you can see is, uh, the buildings.

✓ I'd say I prefer rural areas because urban views are ordinary and all you can see are buildings.

Word choice and agreement: 'the rural areas' can be 'rural areas' without 'the'. 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. 'viewers' is wrong; use 'views'. 'it's normal' should be 'are ordinary' to agree with plural 'views'. 'all you can see is, the buildings' needs subject-verb agreement: 'all you can see are buildings.' Suggestion: 'I prefer rural areas because urban views are ordinary and all you can see are buildings.'

× So I think, uh, nature is more beautiful and I like the wild and the fairy or magnificent.

✓ So I think nature is more beautiful, and I like the wild, the fairytale-like scenes, or the magnificent ones.

Word choice and parallel structure: 'the fairy or magnificent' is unclear. Use 'fairytale-like scenes' for 'fairy' and add 'ones' for parallelism with 'magnificent'. Remove unnecessary commas and filler 'uh'. Suggestion: 'I like the wild, fairytale-like, or magnificent scenes.'

× I prefer the views in other countries 'cause I'm so familiar with this country, so everything I've seen in this country is too basic for me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I am so familiar with my country, so everything I have seen here is too basic for me.

Pronoun and repetition: Replace 'this country' with 'my country' for clarity; avoid repeating 'in this country' by using 'here'. Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. Also expand contraction for clarity. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in other countries because I am so familiar with my country; everything I have seen here is too basic for me.'

× But I think in the different country they have different fears.

✓ But I think in different countries they have different views.

Word choice and number agreement: 'the different country' should be 'different countries' (plural) and 'fears' is the wrong word; use 'views'. Also 'in different countries they have different views' is clearer. Suggestion: 'in different countries there are different views.'

× So that's why I think Asian countries view will be better than my country.

✓ So that's why I think views in Asian countries will be better than those in my country.

Noun phrase and comparison: 'Asian countries view' needs plural and correct word order: 'views in Asian countries'. When comparing plural 'views' use 'those in my country' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: 'views in Asian countries will be better than those in my country.'