Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and concise reasons. Use correct grammar and relevant vocabulary. For example, say whether you like taking photos, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and avoid irrelevant details or names. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I’m not very good at composition and framing, so I don’t enjoy taking landscape photos. For instance, I often struggle to arrange elements in the frame, which makes my pictures look messy. I’m trying to practice more so I can improve.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clarify if you don’t understand a word. Begin with a short topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore, for example). Avoid asking questions back unless necessary for clarification.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because I enjoy quiet, natural scenery and cleaner air. For example, walking in the countryside relaxes me and gives me better photo opportunities than crowded city streets.

Sugerencia: Give a clear statement of preference and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct verb forms and prepositions. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like because and for example to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to visit the United States to see its national parks and experience life there, which I think would be inspirational and different from my own country.

× No, because my join skill is not good when I was a child, my mother.

✓ No, because my joining skills were not good when I was a child.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and wrong noun form. 'join skill' is ungrammatical; use 'joining skills' or 'drawing skills' depending on meaning. Also 'my mother' is extraneous and unclear. Use past tense 'were' for a plural noun 'skills' to agree with subject. Suggestion: clearly state the skill and use past tense and plural form when appropriate.

× Let me practice more drawing skill.

✓ I need to practice drawing skills more.

The original starts with 'Let me' which is unusual here; the intended meaning is personal need. 'Drawing skill' should be plural 'drawing skills' or simply 'drawing' and 'practice' needs 'I need to' or 'I should' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'I need to practice drawing more' for natural phrasing.

× So I hate it and I think John picture is very loose time.

✓ So I hate it, and I think John's pictures were very sloppy at that time.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing possessive form 'John's', incorrect noun 'picture' vs plural 'pictures' for general statement, and unclear phrase 'very loose time' which likely means 'very sloppy at that time.' Use past tense 'were' to match reference to childhood. Suggestion: use possessive for names and clear adjectives like 'sloppy' or 'untidy,' and include a time phrase 'at that time.'

× What is Uber areas or rural areas?

✓ What is the difference between urban areas and rural areas?

The student misheard 'urban' as 'Uber' and uses wrong structure. Use 'the difference between X and Y' to ask for comparison. Also 'urban' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: learn common minimal pairs and use 'urban' not 'Uber' in this context.

× I think in another countries because I think America is very good.

✓ I think in another country because I think America is very good.

Use singular 'another country' rather than plural with 'another.' If the student means 'other countries' use that phrase: 'I think in other countries.' Also 'America' is acceptable but better 'the United States' in formal speech. Suggestion: match 'another' with singular noun or use 'other' with plural noun.

× I want to America travel and life is my dream.

✓ I want to travel to America; living there is my dream.

Preposition ordering is wrong: use 'travel to America' not 'to America travel.' Also 'life is my dream' should be 'living there is my dream' to express desire. Suggestion: place 'to' before destination and use gerund 'living' to describe the dream.