Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and relevant, but contains some small grammar and word-choice errors and a bit of redundancy. Reduce repetition, correct plural/possessive forms, and add a brief specific example to make it more vivid. Keep it within 3–5 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views when I travel. For example, I often take wide shots of mountain ranges and close-ups of morning markets to capture atmosphere. Because photos help me remember special moments and places, I also enjoy sharing selected images with friends on social media.

Sugerencia: Strong, clear answer with good specific details. To improve further, link ideas with a short reason or comparison and avoid slight repetition (e.g., 'views' used often). Add one more concrete example to make it more memorable.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views, mainly because city skylines at night—with their lights and varied architecture—feel exciting. For example, I love watching the skyline from a rooftop café, and visiting city parks lets me see how residents relax amid the buildings.

Sugerencia: Good balanced response and clear contrast. Improve by correcting a small grammar issue and tightening phrasing. Use a linking phrase to contrast and give one concrete example of what you like about each to add specificity.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I enjoy both local and foreign views. For instance, I appreciate the familiar temples and seasonal gardens in Japan for their peacefulness, but I also love exploring vibrant street scenes abroad for their new sights and smells.

× I love capturing beauty scenery whenever I travel.

✓ I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel.

The adjective 'beautiful' should modify the noun 'scenery'. 'Beauty' is a noun and cannot directly modify another noun in this context. Use the adjective form 'beautiful' to describe scenery; suggestion: learn common adjective forms (e.g., beauty -> beautiful).

× Taking photos helps me remember special moment and places and I really enjoy sharing my picture on social media with friends.

✓ Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

There is a mismatch in number: 'moment' and 'picture' should be plural to agree with 'photos' and the general plural sense. Also a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow. Suggestion: make nouns plural when referring to multiple items or general repeated instances (moments, pictures).

× I really enjoy sharing my picture on social media with friends.

✓ I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

Using the singular 'my picture' implies one specific photo; in this context the speaker talks about sharing photos in general, so the plural 'pictures' is appropriate. Alternatively, use 'a picture' if referring to a single image. Suggestion: choose 'a/an' for a single item, plural without article for general plural items.

× There is something about the city skyline at night with all the lights and interesting architecture that I find really exciting.

✓ There is something about the city skyline at night, with all the lights and interesting architecture, that I find really exciting.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but benefits from commas to set off the nonrestrictive phrase 'with all the lights and interesting architecture'. Adding commas clarifies structure and improves readability. Suggestion: use commas to separate additional descriptive phrases.

× I also enjoy rooftop views and city parks because they show a different side of city life.

✓ I also enjoy rooftop views and city parks because they show a different side of city life.

This sentence is already correct; no grammatical change needed. Included here to indicate no error of adjective/adverb use. Suggestion: none.

× To be honest, I enjoy both local and foreign views.

✓ To be honest, I enjoy both local and foreign views.

Sentence is correct in present tense and matches context. Included to show no change needed. Suggestion: none.

× Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery in Japan, while other times I crave the excitement of exploring somewhere complete new for me.

✓ Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery in Japan, while other times I crave the excitement of exploring somewhere completely new to me.

Two issues: 'complete' should be the adverb 'completely' modifying 'new', and the phrase 'for me' is less natural than 'to me' after 'new'. Use adverbs to modify adjectives and 'to me' to express personal perspective. Suggestion: use 'completely new to me' for natural phrasing.