Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but reduce hesitation and redundancy, and organize ideas with a concise topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words appropriately and avoid repeating filler phrases (e.g., “uh”, “by the way” twice). Aim for natural phrasing: state the main reason, then give a specific example or result.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me record memorable places and moments. For example, when I visited the old town last year I took several photos of the architecture and shared them on Instagram so my friends could see the trip.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer, but improve grammar, word choice and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and a brief example. Replace incorrect forms (e.g., “on rural areas” → “in rural areas”; “became” → “are”; “feel more opener” → “feel more relaxed/at ease”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas. Even though I live in a city, rural landscapes feel more natural and peaceful; for instance, wide fields and dense tree lines help me relax during weekend walks.

Sugerencia: Answer is understandable but needs a clearer structure and grammatical corrections. Give a concise topic sentence, then one specific reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases like “unknown sight scenes” and finish sentences fully. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering unfamiliar landscapes and cultures. For example, I find European medieval towns and coastal villages very different from the traditional Chinese architecture I often see at home, so travelling abroad keeps photography interesting.

× I prefer the views on rural areas.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas.

Use 'in' with areas/places (in rural areas). 'On' is incorrect for general location. Replace 'on' with 'in' to indicate location inside the area.

× Although I live in urban areas, I still think rural areas became more natural and there are more trees on rural areas which can let me feel more opener.

✓ Although I live in urban areas, I still think rural areas are more natural and have more trees, which make me feel more open.

Multiple issues: 'became' (past) is incorrect; this is a general present-state comparison, so use 'are' (There be / present tense). 'There are more trees on rural areas' uses wrong preposition 'on' and unnecessary 'there are'; use 'have' for possession. 'which can let me feel more opener' uses comparative 'opener' incorrectly and awkward phrasing; use 'make me feel more open'. Corrections: use present 'are', replace 'there are ... on' with 'have', and use 'make me feel more open'.

× I prefer the views in the other country.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries.

Using 'the other country' implies a specific single other country; the intended meaning is generalized preference for views outside my country, so plural 'other countries' without 'the' is correct. This fixes article/structure and ensures agreement with context.

× I have seen a lot of views in my country and I feel a little bit bored.

✓ I have seen a lot of sights in my country, so I feel a little bored.

'Views' is awkward here; 'sights' or 'places' is more natural. 'I feel a little bit bored' is acceptable but 'a little bored' is more concise. Add 'so' to connect cause and effect clearly.

× For example, there are some ancient buildings with China style, but I prefer to see the unknown sight scenes in the other country which.

✓ For example, there are some ancient buildings in the Chinese style, but I prefer to see unfamiliar sights in other countries.

Use 'in the Chinese style' (adjective form and preposition 'in'). 'Unknown sight scenes' is awkward; 'unfamiliar sights' is natural. Remove the trailing 'which' and change 'the other country' to 'other countries' for general preference. Ensure plural consistency and correct adjective forms.