Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Use correct verb forms, plural/singular agreement, and smoother linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me preserve memories. For example, when I visited a coastal town last year I took many shots of the sunset, so I can look back and remember how peaceful it felt.

Sugerencia: Organize your response: give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with two specific reasons linked by connectors (e.g., “because” / “and”). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid irrelevant remarks. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel calmer and are surrounded by nature. For instance, the wide fields and quiet trails allow me to relax and enjoy the scenery without traffic noise.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then explain briefly with a specific reason. Avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use complete sentences and connect ideas (e.g., “because” or “so”). Add an example or feeling to make the answer more personal and vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and close to my heart. For example, the mountains near my hometown remind me of family trips, so they always make me feel nostalgic and comfortable.

× Yes, I am taking pictures of different view enables me to keep them as my memories.

✓ Yes, taking pictures of different views enables me to keep them as memories.

The sentence incorrectly combines 'I am taking' with a subordinate clause. Use the gerund phrase 'Taking pictures of different views' as the subject. Also 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'different', and 'my memories' is unnatural here; 'them as memories' or 'as mementos' is better. Suggestion: use a gerund subject and plural noun to match context.

× I also can watch it again if I miss this place.

✓ I can also look at them again if I have missed a place.

Pronoun 'it' is unclear for plural 'pictures'; use 'them'. Word order is improved by placing 'can also' together. 'Miss this place' is awkward — use 'have missed a place' or 'missed the place' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use plural pronoun and correct tense for the conditional meaning.

× For me I more prefer rural area because it feel more calm.

✓ For me, I prefer rural areas because they feel calmer.

'Prefer' already expresses preference; 'more prefer' is incorrect. Use 'prefer' alone. 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. 'It feel' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'they feel'. 'More calm' should be comparative 'calmer.' Suggestion: remove 'more' before 'prefer', pluralize nouns when general, and apply correct subject-verb agreement and comparative form.

× Other than that, rural area usually surrounded by nature.

✓ Other than that, rural areas are usually surrounded by nature.

'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' for a general statement. The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'are' for passive voice: 'are usually surrounded.' Suggestion: pluralize and include the correct form of 'be' in passive structures.

× So I can enjoy the view of it.

✓ So I can enjoy the view.

'the view of it' is awkward and unclear; simply 'enjoy the view' is idiomatic. If referring to 'rural areas' or 'nature', say 'enjoy the view there' or 'enjoy the views.' Suggestion: choose a clear, concise object or use 'there' for location.

× What's that?

✓ What is that?

Contraction 'What's' is acceptable in speech but in written correction match formality: 'What is that?' However, this sentence could be contextually odd; if the student asked 'What is that?' it's fine. Suggestion: use full form in formal responses.

× To be honest, I don't really know about other countries, but I more prefer to, I more prefer views in my country and it's really.

✓ To be honest, I don't really know much about other countries, but I prefer the views in my country; they are really close to my heart.

'I more prefer to' is incorrect; use 'I prefer' (avoid 'more'). 'Know about other countries' is better as 'know much about other countries.' 'I prefer views in my country and it's really' is fragmentary; replace with 'they are really close to my heart.' Use plural 'views' and match pronouns 'they.' Suggestion: remove redundant 'more', fix noun phrases, complete the sentence and use appropriate pronoun agreement.