Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct minor grammar errors. For example, start with a direct statement, then briefly explain why and give an example. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I was a child I had a camera, so photography has been a hobby for many years. I especially like capturing landscapes and interesting city scenes because they remind me of places I’ve visited.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference sentence, then use linking words to list specific reasons and give a brief example. Avoid repeating phrases and be more precise with vocabulary (e.g., scenery -> landscapes, many picturesque spots).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer beautiful landscapes such as mountains and rivers. For example, last year I photographed a valley with terraced fields and a winding river, which produced very peaceful images.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then explain clearly with specific comparisons. Use linking words (for example, because, whereas) and avoid filler words like "uh". Replace vague words like "a lot of sceneries" with precise phrases (e.g., diverse landscapes).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe, because they have more diverse landscapes such as mountain ranges and rivers. For example, whereas my country has mainly flat countryside, Europe offers dramatic coastlines and alpine scenery that I find more photogenic.

× Yes, I like to take pictures of different views as as as an A child I used to have a camera so I love to take pictures of the different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views. As a child, I used to have a camera, so I loved taking pictures of different scenes.

The original contains repetition ('as as as an A'), run-on structure, and inconsistent tense. This is a sentence structure error: multiple ideas are fused without proper punctuation and contains a typo. Split into two sentences, remove repeated words, correct 'A' to 'a', use past tense 'used to' with 'loved taking' for natural phrasing, and change 'different views' to 'different scenes' for variety.

× I love to take pictures in the rural areas because the rural areas have such good scenery, mountains, rivers and it has a lot of good places to take pictures.

✓ I love to take pictures in rural areas because they have such beautiful scenery, including mountains and rivers, and many good places to photograph.

The original mixes plural and singular subjects ('the rural areas... it has'), causing a subject-verb agreement error. Replace 'it has' with 'they have' or rephrase. Also adjust word choice: 'good scenery' to 'beautiful scenery' and avoid repeating 'to take pictures'.

× I prefer views in another country such as Europe, because it's a lot of sceneries and rivers and mountains, uh, which in my country is less.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, such as those in Europe, because there is a lot of scenery, including rivers and mountains, which are less common in my country.

Using 'another country such as Europe' and 'a lot of sceneries' is incorrect: 'Europe' is a continent and 'scenery' is uncountable. This is a quantifier and word choice issue. Change 'another country' to 'other countries' or 'countries like those in Europe', use 'a lot of scenery' (uncountable), and ensure agreement 'which are less common in my country'.

× So I like to take more pictures in the country like Europe.

✓ So I like to take more pictures in countries like those in Europe.

The phrase 'the country like Europe' is incorrect and unclear; 'Europe' is not a single country. This is a sentence structure error. Use 'countries like those in Europe' or 'countries in Europe' for clarity and correct noun usage.