Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and informal phrasing like "click pictures of mine."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes to capture memories, and I usually share a few of my favorite shots on social media because it makes me feel connected with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid vague or unclear comparisons and correct grammar (e.g. "an urban area").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas. This is because cities offer convenient facilities like parks, museums, and cafes, and I enjoy the lively atmosphere, whereas rural areas often lack the variety of services I use regularly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and politely, then give specific reasons without overgeneralizing or criticizing your country. Use linking words and clearer vocabulary (e.g. "more developed").

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because many of them have well-preserved historical sites and efficient tourist facilities. However, I also appreciate scenic and cultural spots in my own country, and I enjoy visiting both depending on what I want to see.

× Yes, as I am a photogenic person I love to visit to different places as I am fond of traveling and whenever I go to somewhere I love to click pictures of mine and the view as I love to post them on social media which makes me feel happy.

✓ Yes. I am a photogenic person, so I love to visit different places because I am fond of traveling. Whenever I go somewhere, I love to take pictures of myself and the view, and I enjoy posting them on social media because it makes me happy.

Multiple preposition errors: 'visit to different places' should be 'visit different places' (no 'to' after 'visit'); 'go to somewhere' should be 'go somewhere' (no 'to'); 'click pictures of mine' is awkward—use 'take pictures of myself' or 'take my picture'. Also run-on sentence and missing commas; split into shorter sentences and use appropriate conjunctions ('so', 'because', 'and') for clarity. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and use common collocations ('visit places', 'go somewhere', 'take pictures of myself').

× From my childhood I lived in an urban area, so I prefer to live in a urban area because it consists of everything that a human need.

✓ Since my childhood I have lived in an urban area, so I prefer to live in an urban area because it has everything a person needs.

Errors include article misuse ('a urban' should be 'an urban' because 'urban' begins with a vowel sound) and tense/verb choice ('From my childhood I lived' is awkward—use present perfect 'I have lived' to indicate a continuing situation). Also 'consists of' is incorrect for 'has' and 'a human need' should be 'a person needs' (subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing). Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds, use present perfect for life-long states, and replace 'consists of' with 'has'.

× As European countryside is difficult to have something that are there where where you should go and.

✓ The European countryside often lacks some conveniences and attractions that make it easy to get around, so it can be difficult to find the things you need there.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Problems: missing article ('the European countryside'), subject-verb agreement ('something that are' should be 'things that are' or 'something that is'), redundancy ('where where'), and incomplete thought ending with 'and.' Rephrase to convey meaning: use plural 'things' with plural verb, include articles, and complete the clause. Suggestion: rewrite unclear clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid repetition.

× As we all know that India is a developing nation so I prefer other countries.

✓ As we all know, India is a developing nation, so I prefer other countries.

Main issue is punctuation and connector use rather than preposition; keep sentence but add comma after the introductory clause. No preposition error here; nevertheless keep structure. Suggestion: use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× As India is not a proper developed country so it there are many things that have to be modified in India so I prefer other countries view accept.

✓ India is not yet fully developed, so there are many things that need to be improved; therefore I prefer the views of other countries.

Multiple errors: 'proper developed country' is unidiomatic—use 'fully developed'; 'so it there are' has incorrect word order and extra words; 'have to be modified' is acceptable but 'need to be improved' is more natural; 'other countries view accept' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'views of other countries' or 'scenery in other countries'. Suggestion: simplify and clarify sentence structure, use natural collocations ('fully developed', 'need to be improved', 'views of other countries'), and connect clauses with appropriate linking words ('therefore').