Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify your meaning and use natural, coherent sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give specific supporting details (what kinds of views, why you like them, and how you take photos). Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes because they remind me of where I’ve been. I usually use my phone to capture the light and colors at sunrise or sunset, and I save them to remember the atmosphere.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and off-topic. Give a direct choice (urban or rural), then explain with specific reasons and linking words. Mention features you like (architecture, nature, quietness) and a brief example of a place or moment.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I like natural scenery and quiet surroundings. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small lakes since they offer peaceful compositions and interesting light, whereas cities can be crowded and distracting.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and explain why with specific details. Say whether you prefer local or foreign views, and support it with reasons (familiarity, cultural interest, variety) and a brief example. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel a stronger connection to the landscapes. For example, I often photograph historical towns and coastal areas at golden hour since they reflect my culture and are easy to revisit for better shots.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different women because I am a beauty level.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I appreciate beauty.

The student used incorrect nouns/adjectives: 'women' and 'beauty level' do not fit the question about views. This is incorrect word choice (adjective/noun usage). Suggest using 'views' and a phrase like 'appreciate beauty' to convey the intended meaning. Replace inappropriate nouns and adjust sentence to be natural and relevant.

× So whenever I see a beautiful view, I started to take you pictures of me to capture as a memory.

✓ So whenever I see a beautiful view, I start to take pictures to capture it as a memory.

The student mixed present time clause 'whenever I see' with a past tense verb 'started', causing tense inconsistency. Use simple present 'start' to match the habitual action. Also 'you pictures of me' is wrong pronoun/object choice; replace with 'take pictures' and 'capture it' to refer to the view.

× I prefer food streaming in life with bloody areas because I think in rumours I would.

✓ I prefer scenes of everyday life in rural areas because I think they are more peaceful.

Multiple incorrect word choices and tense/confusing verbs make the sentence incoherent. 'Prefer' is present but followed by nonsense nouns 'food streaming', 'bloody areas', 'rumours'. This is primarily incorrect adjectives/nouns and wrong tense usage; rewrite using correct nouns 'scenes of everyday life' and correct present-tense clause 'I think they are more peaceful.' Suggest simplifying and using clear nouns and adjectives.

× You are more beautiful than an apprentice because of illogical buildings in liberal areas.

✓ Urban areas are less attractive than rural areas because of the many concrete buildings in cities.

The original uses inappropriate pronouns ('You') and wrong adjectives ('apprentice', 'illogical', 'liberal') causing meaning errors. This is incorrect adjective/noun usage. Replace with clear comparative structure referring to 'urban' vs 'rural' and correct descriptive adjectives like 'concrete' or 'tall' buildings.

× We cannot capture you.

✓ We cannot capture those views easily.

Pronoun 'you' is incorrect; sentence lacks clear object and meaning. This is a sentence structure/pronoun choice error. Replace with 'those views' and add adverb 'easily' if intended.

× Well I prefer serious in my own country and in another country because I think other countries will are sometime messed up being too long buildings and will not capture easily because of lawn buildings.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because buildings abroad can be very tall and make it hard to photograph the scenery.

The sentence mixes incorrect adjectives ('serious'), wrong modal construction 'will are', and awkward nouns 'long buildings', 'lawn buildings'. This is primarily present-tense and sentence structure problems. Use consistent present tense 'prefer' and clear noun phrases 'tall buildings' and 'make it hard to photograph' to express the idea.

× That's why I prefer introducing my own.

✓ That's why I prefer photographing scenes in my own country.

The verb 'introducing' is incorrect here and article/phrasing is awkward. This is an article/word choice problem: use 'my own country' with a clear verb 'photographing' or 'my own country' as the object. Also include 'the' only when needed; here 'my own country' is correct without additional article.