Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và rõ ràng bằng cách tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; cấu trúc câu nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể liên quan. Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, so). Hạn chế độ dài dưới 5 câu và tránh cụm từ thừa như “the it's the”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture the beauty and atmosphere of a place. For example, I like photographing sunsets and city skylines since the colours and light create a pleasant feeling.

Sugerencia: Giảm lặp từ và sửa từ vựng sai; bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi phát triển bằng các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết logic. Thay các từ lặp như “views” và “view” bằng từ thay thế (scenery, landscapes) và sửa danh từ số nhiều/đếm được (farmlands). Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural scenery because it is closer to nature and feels more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy landscapes like mountains, farmlands and coastal views, which offer variety and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, số nhiều/ít và trật tự từ; nêu rõ quan điểm trong câu chủ đề rồi giải thích vì sao với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ như “I personally I” và dùng danh từ số nhiều khi cần (views, countries, scenery).

Ejemplo: I like views in my own country, but I prefer those in other countries because they offer different cultures and unique landscapes. For example, travelling abroad lets me see historic architecture and coastal scenery I cannot find at home.

× Yes, I like to take pictures of different views a lot since I can see the it's the views, beauty and surrounding which give me a pleasant feeling about it.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views a lot because I can see the views, their beauty, and the surroundings, which give me a pleasant feeling.

The original has redundant and incorrect phrases ('the it's the views'), wrong noun forms ('surrounding' should be plural or 'the surroundings'), and awkward clause linking. Simplify the sentence by removing redundancy and using parallel nouns ('views, their beauty, and the surroundings'). Use 'because' for reason and add commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× In my opinion, I personally prefer views in rural areas since they are closer to nature and there's a lot of beautiful views you can view from the natures such as seas, farm lands, mountains and many more.

✓ In my opinion, I personally prefer views in rural areas since they are closer to nature and there are many beautiful views you can see in nature, such as the sea, farmlands, mountains, and more.

Errors include incorrect use of 'there's' with plural noun, wrong prepositions ('view from the natures'), and incorrect plural forms ('farm lands', 'natures'). Use 'there are' for plural, 'see in nature' or 'in nature', and correct noun forms: 'sea', 'farmlands'. Also use parallel list structure and commas.

× I personally I do like view in my country but I prefer views in other country more seeing a more sceneries and places to visit.

✓ I personally do like the views in my country, but I prefer views in other countries because there are more sceneries and places to visit.

Problems: redundant 'I personally I', missing articles ('the views'), singular/plural mismatch ('other country' should be 'other countries'), and awkward clause 'seeing a more sceneries'. Replace with 'because there are more sceneries' and correct article/plural usage. Ensure pronouns and determiners match the nouns.