Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good ideas and some variety of vocabulary. To improve, make sentences more concise and finish thoughts fully (avoid trailing phrases). Add one specific example to support your statements and use a linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., “For example,” or “Moreover,”). Keep responses within 3–4 sentences to sound natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I love capturing beautiful scenery when I travel because it helps me remember special moments. For example, last year I photographed the sunset over a mountain lake, experimenting with different angles and lighting to get a reflection on the water. I also enjoy sharing my best shots with friends online.

Sugerencia: Your main idea is clear (preference for rural views) but the answer is wordy, contains grammar issues, and ends abruptly. Simplify sentences, correct collocations (say “consists of” → “has” or “is full of”), and provide one specific supporting detail or short example. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly and finish the final clause.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are full of greenery and fresh air, which helps me relax. For example, I often go to the countryside on weekends to walk along trails and enjoy the quiet atmosphere. This gives me a real break from the city noise.

Sugerencia: This answer is confusing and uses inappropriate words (e.g., “triggers,” “insatiable,” “incisive”) and vague phrasing. Be direct: state your choice, give a straightforward reason, and include a concrete example. Use simpler, context-appropriate vocabulary and a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.” Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places I haven’t visited yet. For example, I plan to explore several coastal towns this year after seeing inspiring photos of them on social media.

× Photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect.

✓ Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'the perfect.' It is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the object is missing. Adding the noun 'shot' completes the idea. Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses correctly. Suggestion: ensure each clause has its required objects and use punctuation to join clauses.

× Well, I prefer rural views because it consists of greenery, scenery, also for getting fresh air and it's the best place to unwind and relax your nervous system and I sometimes try to go to the countryside on weekends to walk and enjoy the.

✓ Well, I prefer rural views because they consist of greenery and beautiful scenery, they provide fresh air, and they're the best places to unwind and relax. I sometimes try to go to the countryside on weekends to walk and enjoy it.

This contains several errors: 'it consists' mismatches the plural subject 'rural views' (Subject-verb agreement ID 27), and the sentence structure is run-on and incomplete ('enjoy the.'). Also 'nervous system' is unnatural here. Corrections: change 'it consists' to 'they consist', 'scenery, also for getting fresh air' reorganized to 'and beautiful scenery, they provide fresh air', and finish the second clause with 'enjoy it.' Break into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: match verb number to subject, avoid run-on sentences, and include required objects.

× Due to many triggers, nowadays we actually feel insatiable with our own view in our country because of the view, views and the places that we see on our social media platform is actually very incisive.

✓ Nowadays, we often feel dissatisfied with the views in our own country because the places we see on social media can seem more attractive.

Original has mixed problems: awkward phrasing and incorrect subject-verb agreement ('the view, views and the places ... is' — should be plural agreement) as well as poor word choice ('insatiable' and 'incisive' are misused). This falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Correction simplifies and uses appropriate vocabulary: 'dissatisfied' rather than 'insatiable', and matches plural subjects with plural verbs. Suggestion: use clear vocabulary that fits meaning, ensure subject and verb agree, and avoid redundant words.

× So I would say I would like my own country because there are so many places that I haven't been.

✓ So I would say I prefer my own country because there are many places I haven't visited yet.

This sentence is mostly understandable but can be improved. It has redundancy ('I would say I would like') and a weak verb choice ('been' is informal). Classified as sentence structure error (ID 26). Correction removes redundancy ('I would say I prefer') and uses 'visited' for clarity, adding 'yet' to express expectation. Suggestion: avoid repeating modal phrases and choose precise verbs.

× Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

✓ Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with my friends.

Minor pronoun/possessive clarity issue (ID 12): 'with friends' is acceptable, but 'with my friends' is clearer and more natural when referring to the speaker's social circle. Suggestion: use possessive pronouns to clarify relationships when needed.