Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid pauses and fillers, and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'on the road of travel' → 'when I travel'). Provide one brief supporting detail about what kinds of views you prefer or why photography matters to you. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures when I travel because photos help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes to capture the mood of a place. They also let me share my trips with family and friends.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer with a clear opinion first, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitation and repetition. Avoid contradictory statements; if you say you like both, clarify which you prefer to live in and why. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'bustling downtown' and 'peaceful countryside').

Ejemplo: I like both types of views, but if I had to choose I prefer natural, rural scenery for relaxing and urban views for short visits. For instance, rural landscapes are peaceful and good for hiking, whereas bustling downtowns offer interesting architecture and lively street life.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons and examples. Correct grammar (e.g., 'this country have' → 'those countries have' and avoid confusing endings like 'They're my country'). Use linking words to explain why you prefer foreign views and mention a specific feature from each country named.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, such as Thailand and Australia, because they offer distinctive natural landscapes. For example, Thailand has lush tropical beaches and vibrant islands, while Australia has dramatic coastlines and unique wildlife, which I find more exciting than what I usually see at home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures when I'm on the road of travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I'm traveling.

Use the verb + -ing (present participle) to describe being in the process of travel. 'On the road of travel' is awkward and unidiomatic; 'traveling' is concise and correct.

× I want to save the best memory there by clicking the. Camera button.

✓ I want to save my best memories there by pressing the camera button.

The original has incorrect word order and a period in the middle of the sentence. Use plural 'memories' or 'memory' consistently; 'pressing the camera button' is natural. Also remove the stray period.

× I think it really depends on what kind of view it is.

✓ I think it really depends on what kind of view it is.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense; no change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× Umm, I do like umm, the natural views. Then the bustling umm, downtown views.

✓ I like natural views and bustling downtown scenes.

Combine fragments into a single clear sentence. Use 'scenes' or 'views' for parallel structure; remove filler sounds for clarity.

× But I umm, would like uh, live in a living downtown then umm in uh, uh, rural area.

✓ But I would prefer to live in a downtown area rather than in a rural area.

Original has incorrect word choice and order. Use 'would prefer to live' and 'rather than' for comparison. Add articles: 'a downtown area' and 'a rural area.'

× To be honest I prefer views in many other countries like Thailand and Australia because I love the natural umm umm views and just like I said umm so I think this country have better natural view and landscapes.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the views in other countries like Thailand and Australia because I love natural scenery, and as I said, I think those countries have better natural views and landscapes.

Multiple issues: missing commas, unnecessary fillers, noun choice ('scenery' instead of repeated 'views'), subject-verb agreement error corrected ('countries have' not 'this country have'), and pluralization ('views' and 'landscapes'). Also 'those countries' clarifies reference rather than 'this country.'

× They're my country.

✓ They are not my country.

The original 'They're my country' is unclear and contradictory to prior sentence. If intent was to say 'They are not my country' or 'Those are my favorite countries,' clarify meaning. Here corrected to 'They are not my country' if speaker meant foreign countries; alternatively 'Those are my favorite countries' if positive. The pronoun 'they' must match plural noun and be clear in context.