Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like "uh" and correct grammar (e.g., singular/plural and word order). Add one or two specific supporting details and use a linking word. For example, briefly state why it is meaningful and give a concrete example of a view you like.

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me remember special moments. For example, when I visit the seaside I like to capture the sunrise and the colors of the sky, which reminds me of that peaceful morning.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference (you gave mixed messages) and use correct grammar and vocabulary. State your choice in one clear sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons linked with a connector (e.g., "because" or "so"). Correct articles and plural forms (e.g., "rural areas", "mountains").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer natural landscapes and peace. For example, I enjoy walking by forests and lakes, and looking at mountain views because they help me relax.

Sugerencia: Be more precise and grammatical. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then explain why using clear phrasing (e.g., "they feel new to me"), and give a brief example of a type of foreign view you find exciting. Avoid vague phrases like "fresh form."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel new and different to me. For instance, I find the architecture and street scenes in Europe exciting because they look unlike what I see at home.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because uh taking picture is a really meaningful when never taking picture in various field, various fields gives us various scenery.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because taking pictures is really meaningful; seeing different fields gives us various scenery.

Errors: inconsistent singular/plural and incorrect article use around 'picture(s)', awkward phrase 'when never taking picture', and sentence structure problems. Correction: use the gerund 'taking pictures' consistently, remove 'when never', change 'in various field' to 'seeing different fields' and 'various fields gives' to 'different fields give' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: keep consistent plural forms for countable nouns, avoid unnecessary filler words, and simplify clauses for clarity.

× I like urban area. I like a rural areas rather than urban areas because in rural areas there are many natural resources such as forest, lakes or a beautiful mountains. So.

✓ I like urban areas. I prefer rural areas rather than urban areas because rural areas have many natural resources such as forests, lakes, and beautiful mountains.

Errors: mismatch between singular/plural (urban area vs urban areas; a rural areas), incorrect articles ('a beautiful mountains'), and redundant phrasing. Correction: use plural 'areas' to match general preference, replace 'I like' with 'I prefer' for contrast, pluralize 'forest' to 'forests', remove incorrect 'a' before plural 'mountains', and use 'have' instead of 'there are' for smoother sentence. Suggestion: ensure noun number (singular/plural) matches determiners and verbs; use consistent form when speaking about general categories.

× I like urban area. I like a rural areas rather than urban areas because in rural areas there are many natural resources such as forest, lakes or a beautiful mountains. So.

✓ I like urban areas. I prefer rural areas to urban areas because rural areas have many natural resources such as forests, lakes, and beautiful mountains.

Errors: incorrect use of quantifiers and connectors ('such as forest' should be 'such as forests'), misuse of 'or' when listing items (use commas and 'and'), and unnecessary 'a' before plural noun. Correction: list items correctly and use plural nouns. Suggestion: when giving examples, use 'such as' followed by plural nouns when referring to multiple types; separate items with commas and use 'and' before the last item.

× various fields gives us various scenery.

✓ various fields give us various scenery.

Error: 'fields' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'give' not 'gives'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject number; identify the subject (fields) and ensure verb agrees.

× I prefer views in other countries because in other countries every views in pictures are fresh form or fresh for me. So it is really exciting for me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the views in pictures from other countries feel fresh to me, so they are really exciting.

Errors: 'every views' mixes singular determiner with plural noun, awkward phrase 'fresh form or fresh for me', and tense/use of 'are' is acceptable but phrasing unnatural. Correction: use 'the views' or 'views' with plural agreement, use 'feel fresh to me' for subjective perception, and combine clauses smoothly. Suggestion: ensure determiners match noun number ('every' requires singular noun), use natural verbs like 'feel' for impressions, and avoid repeating 'other countries' unnecessarily.

× every views in pictures are fresh form or fresh for me.

✓ the views in pictures are fresh to me.

Errors: 'every views' incorrect determiner-noun agreement ('every' + singular required), 'fresh form' is incorrect phrase, and unnecessary words. Correction: use 'the views' or 'views' and 'fresh to me'. Suggestion: choose correct determiners ('every' with singular, 'all' with plural) and use common collocations like 'fresh to me'.