Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và ngắt quãng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, giải thích lý do ngắn gọn, và nếu cần thì thêm một chi tiết minh họa. Sử dụng liên từ khi mở rộng ý để mạch lạc (ví dụ: because, so, however).

Ejemplo: No, I don't really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I prefer experiencing a place in person rather than through a camera. For example, when I travel I like to focus on the atmosphere and talk to locals instead of spending time photographing every scene.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên mở câu bằng một câu trả lời rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do với cấu trúc ngắn gọn và sử dụng từ nối (for example, because, so). Tránh lặp âm và sửa phát âm từ sai (ví dụ: 'ruler' -> 'rural'). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về điều bạn thích sẽ cải thiện điểm số.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. For example, I enjoy seeing green fields and quiet streets, which help me unwind after a busy week and imagine living in a calmer environment.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng ngữ pháp chính xác (ví dụ: 'I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries'). Giải thích cụ thể lý do và nêu ví dụ về di sản hoặc danh lam thắng cảnh để câu trả lời có nội dung rõ ràng hơn. Tránh sử dụng nhiều tiếng ồ ồ và lặp từ.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries because it has many famous historical sites and cultural landmarks. For instance, there are ancient temples and traditional festivals that showcase our heritage and make the scenery more meaningful to me.

× I don't like and I never thought about that exercise too.

✓ I don't like it, and I have never thought about doing that activity either.

The original sentence has repetition and incorrect verb forms. Use an object 'it' after 'like'. Use present perfect 'have never thought' to indicate experience up to now. Use 'doing that activity' or 'that exercise' for clarity and 'either' instead of 'too' in negative contexts. Example improvement: 'I don't like it, and I have never thought about doing that activity either.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I would prefer all views of ruler rural areas because it seems make me feel more comfortable, more relief.

✓ I would prefer views of rural areas because they seem to make me feel more comfortable and more relaxed.

Problems: 'ruler' is wrong word; use 'rural'. 'All views of' is awkward — use 'views of'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it seems make' is incorrect; use 'they seem to make' because 'views' is plural. 'More relief' is unnatural; use 'more relaxed' or 'a greater sense of relief'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Also is a is is very green, I would like to live in that place.

✓ Also, it is very green, and I would like to live in that place.

Missing subject 'it' before 'is'. There is repetitive 'is a is is' — remove extras. Add conjunction 'and' to join clauses. Keep 'that place' to refer to the rural area. Use punctuation to separate ideas. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I would prefer my views of country than rather than, uh, other country because my, uh, country have a have a very have the most heritage that famous or of, uh.

✓ I would prefer the sights in my country rather than those in other countries because my country has many famous historical sites and a rich heritage.

Problems: 'my views of country' is ungrammatical — use 'the sights in my country' or 'places in my country'. Remove duplicate 'rather than' and filler 'uh'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my country have' should be 'my country has'. Word order and redundancy: 'have a have a very have the most heritage that famous' is unclear; clarify as 'many famous historical sites and a rich heritage'. Also pluralize 'countries' when comparing to 'other countries'. Grammar problem type ID: 22