Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (articles, plurals), and use linking words to connect ideas. Add a specific example to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes. I find that photos help me remember experiences more vividly, and I can revisit them later on my phone. For example, when I look at pictures from a hiking trip, I can recall the route and the views as if I were there again.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, fix grammar and reduce repetition (avoid 'also' twice), use linking words (because, so) and include a brief specific detail or example about what you like in rural views.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I love being surrounded by nature. The greenery and fresh air help me relax when I'm stressed, and I especially enjoy walking along quiet country trails where I can hear birds and unwind.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct grammatical errors (word order, articles). Use linking words to explain reasons and give a concrete example of a foreign landscape you found impressive. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the landscapes are often very different from those at home. For instance, I was amazed by the dramatic fjords in Norway, which were much more spectacular and varied than anything I had seen in my country.

× I love to take pictures of different fields 'cause I think people's brain can't remember everything.

✓ I love taking pictures of different fields because I think people's brains can't remember everything.

Use the gerund 'taking' after 'love' for natural English; use 'because' instead of informal 'cause'; 'people's brain' should be plural 'people's brains' to match multiple people (singular/plural agreement).

× But taking picture, it's like remembering things in your phone and you can go through the pictures anytime you want.

✓ But taking a picture is like storing memories on your phone, and you can go through the pictures anytime you want.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with 'picture' when speaking generally; 'it's like remembering things in your phone' is awkward—'storing memories on your phone' is clearer and more natural; keep sentence continuity with a comma before 'and'.

× It's just like taking the trip again.

✓ It's just like taking the trip again.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but could be improved stylistically by keeping it as is; no grammar change necessary. (No listed grammar problem types applied.)

× I'd say rural areas 'cause I really love nature and all the greens just relax my eyes when I feel overwhelmed and also the fresh air also calmed me down a lot so I prefer rural areas.

✓ I'd say rural areas because I really love nature; all the greenery relaxes my eyes when I feel overwhelmed, and the fresh air calms me down a lot, so I prefer rural areas.

Replace informal 'cause' with 'because'; 'greens' is informal—use 'greenery' as a mass noun; subject-verb agreement: 'greenery relaxes' not 'relax'; maintain consistent tense 'calms' instead of 'calmed'; split into clauses with punctuation for clarity.

× I prefer views in other countries 'cause they're all a lot of geography difference from my country and I love to explore that to see how. Breathtaking they are.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because their geography is very different from my country's, and I love to explore them to see how breathtaking they are.

Replace 'they're all a lot of geography difference' with 'their geography is very different' for correct noun phrase and adjective order; use 'my country's' to show possession; 'explore that' should be 'explore them' (correct pronoun reference to 'views' or 'countries'); combine the fragment 'Breathtaking they are.' into the sentence as 'how breathtaking they are' to avoid sentence fragment and ensure correct word order.