Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor wording mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Replace awkward phrases (e.g. "beautiful standard") with natural expressions and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views. As a keen amateur photographer, I especially enjoy landscapes because they offer wide, changing scenes. For example, I often capture sunsets and mountain panoramas to show natural light and scale.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and supply specific details. Fix mistakes like "The I" and awkward phrases such as "scenics" and "across from the ocean." Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer long sightlines and more dramatic natural scenes. For instance, I love photographing coastlines—beaches, the open ocean and sunsets—because the light and horizon create striking compositions.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer main sentence and add a specific example with correct tense and concise phrasing. Use linking words to show contrast or similarity and avoid vague expressions like "essence" without explanation.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each place offers different landscapes and cultures. For example, when I visit Australia I would photograph the Outback to capture its vast red plains and unique light, which contrast strongly with my home scenery.

× I am a photographer at heart and I cannot pass a beautiful standard without taking a picture of it.

✓ I am a photographer at heart and I cannot pass a beautiful scene without taking a picture of it.

The phrase 'beautiful standard' is incorrect collocation. 'Standard' is a noun meaning level or criterion; the intended meaning is a 'scene' or 'sight'. Replace with 'scene' to convey the visual subject to photograph. No tense or verb-form change is needed.

× Personally, I prefer taking pictures of landscapes rather than buildings.

✓ Personally, I prefer taking pictures of landscapes rather than of buildings.

When contrasting two objects with 'rather than', including the preposition 'of' before the second noun ('of buildings') makes the parallel structure clearer. This is a pronoun/preposition-related parallelism issue; adding 'of' improves grammatical balance.

× I prefer views in rural areas because you can see for further distances and it makes for more beautiful pictures.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because you can see much farther and it makes for more beautiful pictures.

The phrase 'for further distances' is unidiomatic. Use 'farther' (comparative adverb for physical distance) and place 'much' before it for emphasis: 'much farther'. This fixes adverb choice and placement.

× The I especially enjoy the scenics of the coastline and taking pictures of the beach and the ocean and the sunset across from the ocean.

✓ I especially enjoy the scenery of the coastline and taking pictures of the beach, the ocean, and the sunset over the ocean.

This sentence has extra word 'The', incorrect noun 'scenics', and awkward coordination with repeated 'and'. Replace 'scenics' with 'scenery' and remove 'The'. Use commas to list items and change 'across from the ocean' to the natural preposition 'over the ocean' for sunsets. This addresses word choice and sentence structure.

× I like views in my own country as well as other countries.

✓ I like views in my own country as well as in other countries.

To maintain parallel prepositional structure, include 'in' before 'other countries'. This clarifies the comparison and corrects the omitted preposition.

× I believe each country has a unique view to offer and I like to capture the essence of each country.

✓ I believe each country has a unique view to offer, and I like to capture the essence of each country.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity for two independent clauses. No tense change is required.

× When I visit, for example in Australia, I would like to take a picture of the beautiful Outback.

✓ When I visit Australia, for example, I would like to take a picture of the beautiful Outback.

The original word order is awkward. Move 'for example' after 'Australia' to make the clause clear. 'Would like' is a correct modal expression for desire about a possible future action; no modal change is needed.