Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer brief and directly stated. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar (e.g., “I like taking pictures of different views”). Add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use simple but accurate vocabulary such as “scenery,” “interesting,” or “beautiful.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph seaside sunsets because they look beautiful and the colours change quickly, so I can practise capturing light and composition.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear preference sentence, avoid repeating words, and correct grammar: use “I like both, but I prefer rural areas.” Give a specific reason with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “because of”). Replace vague words like “cozy” and “happy” with concrete details (e.g., “quiet streets, green fields, and fresh air”).

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy the open fields and the sound of birds, which help me relax and take calmer, more focused photos.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct phrasing (e.g., “I prefer views in other countries”). Avoid unclear words like “fuse” and “few.” Provide one clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” and simple accurate vocabulary (e.g., “unique landscapes,” “different architecture,” “cultural variety”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often have different landscapes and architecture. For example, when I visited Japan I was fascinated by the contrast between modern cityscapes and traditional temples, which I hadn’t seen in my own country.

× Yes, I like to taking picture of different views because in my opinion I think in my opinion in different views can give some picture pretty or I can see.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because, in my opinion, different views can produce pretty pictures and I enjoy seeing them.

The original uses the infinitive with to plus -ing (to taking) which is incorrect; after 'like' use the gerund 'taking' or the infinitive 'to take'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. The phrase repeats 'in my opinion' and has unclear clause order; revise to 'in my opinion, different views can produce pretty pictures and I enjoy seeing them.' Suggestions: use 'like taking' or 'like to take', make nouns plural when referring generally, remove repetition, and order clauses clearly.

× I like both, both of them, but I so like rural areas because in rural areas it's very cozy and make me happy when I see rural areas.

✓ I like both, but I prefer rural areas because rural places are very cozy and make me happy when I see them.

'Both of them' is redundant after 'I like both.' 'So like' is informal and awkward; use 'prefer' or 'really like.' 'It's very cozy' lacks a clear subject; use 'rural places are very cozy.' 'Make me happy when I see rural areas' should use the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition: 'when I see them.' Suggestions: avoid redundancy, choose clearer verbs like 'prefer' or 'really like,' ensure subject-verb agreement, and replace repeated nouns with pronouns.

× In my point of view I prefer fuse in other country because in other countries I always see the few so cosy different my country.

✓ In my point of view, I prefer views in other countries because I often find them more cozy and different from my country.

The phrase 'prefer fuse in other country' contains multiple errors: 'fuse' is incorrect word, should be 'views'; 'in other country' needs plural 'countries' or 'another country' with article. 'I always see the few so cosy different my country' is ungrammatical: use 'I often find them more cozy and different from my country.' Use preposition 'from' for comparison ('different from'). Also add commas for clarity. Suggestions: use correct nouns ('views'), correct plural or articles ('other countries' or 'another country'), use 'different from' for comparisons, and simplify to 'I prefer views in other countries because I find them more cozy and different from my country.'