Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and coherence by giving a clear topic sentence then one or two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetitive phrasing; replace vague phrases like "not really into" with precise statements (e.g. "I don't enjoy photography much"). Add a brief positive or negative consequence to make the answer more informative.

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy photography very much because I'm not confident in my skills. For example, my selfies usually look awkward, so I tend to avoid taking pictures of myself. As a result, I rarely carry a camera or spend time composing shots.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and use precise vocabulary. Correct inaccurate or awkward phrases (e.g. "walking by feel", "city feuds"). Use linking words (e.g. "however", "for example") and provide concrete sensory details to support your preference. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid contradictory points without clarification.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and let me relax in nature. For example, I enjoy walking along country paths and looking at rolling hills and fields, which helps me forget the stress of city life. However, I sometimes enjoy urban skylines at night because the lights look beautiful.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid filler words (uh, um). Start with a clear preference, then give specific reasons and one concrete example. Use linking words (e.g. "for example", "but") appropriately and correct awkward phrases (e.g. "prefer a few" should be "prefer those at home"; "when I have the chance").

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and less expensive to visit. For example, I often go to nearby mountains that are quiet and beautiful, which helps me relax. However, I also enjoy famous views abroad, such as the Swiss Alps, when I have the chance to travel.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photography because I don't feel confident in my skills.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into photography because I don't feel confident about my skills.

Use 'confident about' or 'confident in' with a noun phrase; 'confident in my skills' or 'confident about my skills' are both correct. This improves natural collocation and clarity.

× When I take selfies, they often look awkward so I usually avoid taking pictures of myself.

✓ When I take selfies, they often look awkward, so I usually avoid taking pictures of myself.

No plural/singular error but a punctuation/connector issue; adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence structure. This preserves plural 'selfies' which is correct.

× Well, I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and feel relaxed in nature.

✓ Well, I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and make me feel relaxed in nature.

'Feel relaxed' must be applied to a person; use 'make me feel relaxed' or 'are relaxing'. This corrects incorrect adjective/adverb usage and clarifies subject of 'feel'.

× For example, when I go to the countryside, I enjoy walking by feel and looking at hills and it helps me forget the busy city life.

✓ For example, when I go to the countryside, I enjoy walking slowly and looking at the hills, and it helps me forget the busy city life.

'Walking by feel' is incorrect; likely meant 'walking slowly' or 'walking and feeling relaxed'. Also add 'the' before 'hills' for specificity and a comma before 'and' joining independent clauses. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× But sometimes I also like city feuds at night because I like looks beautiful.

✓ But sometimes I also like the city views at night because I think they look beautiful.

'City feuds' is incorrect word choice; 'city views' fits context. 'I like looks beautiful' is ungrammatical; use 'I think they look beautiful' or 'I like how they look' to correct adjective/adverb usage and clause structure.

× Well, I prefer a few in my own country because they are familiar and I can visit them easily and cheaply.

✓ Well, I prefer places in my own country because they are familiar and I can visit them easily and cheaply.

'A few' is vague and used incorrectly here; specify 'places' or 'views'. This fixes quantifier use and clarifies meaning.

× For example, if I, uh, I often go to the nearby mountains, which are beautiful and quiet and I feel relaxed there.

✓ For example, I often go to the nearby mountains, which are beautiful and quiet, and I feel relaxed there.

Remove the unnecessary 'if I, uh,' filler that breaks sentence structure. Add a comma before 'and' linking clauses. This corrects structure and fluency.

× But sometime I also enjoy seeing famous views abroad, like the Swiss Alps, uh, when I have, uh, the chain.

✓ But sometimes I also enjoy seeing famous views abroad, like the Swiss Alps, when I have the chance.

Correct 'sometime' to 'sometimes' for habitual present tense. Replace 'the chain' with 'the chance' (word choice). Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. This corrects tense adverb and word choice.