Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (Uh, you know), correct grammar (e.g., “my favorite is landscapes”), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing landscapes because I find natural scenes like rivers and mountains calming. For example, I often wake up early to capture sunrise light on a nearby river, which gives my photos warm, dramatic colors.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “unique unit specialties”) and fix grammar (e.g., “I prefer views of rural areas because I enjoy the fresh air”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views of rural areas. Because rural landscapes have cleaner air and more natural scenery, they feel more relaxing and photogenic than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear position (own country or other countries), then give specific reasons and a short example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., “I am Indonesian,” “we don't have a winter season,” “I would like to experience abroad”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in my own country because Indonesia offers a great variety of landscapes, from mountains to oceans. However, I would also like to experience snowy scenery abroad since we don’t have a winter season here.

× I do, yes I do. I like to take a lot of pictures, but my favorite 1 is about landscape.

✓ I do, yes I do. I like to take a lot of pictures, but my favorite is landscapes.

The phrase 'favorite 1' is incorrect; a numeral is not used here. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to refer to the category of photos. Use a noun in correct form to express preference (favorite + plural noun). Suggestion: say 'my favorite is landscapes' or 'my favorite is landscape photography.'

× Uh, you know, if it is there's a river or mountains or other things from the nature.

✓ Uh, you know, when there is a river or mountains or other natural features.

The original mixes conditional 'if' with existential 'there's' and uses 'from the nature' which is incorrect. Use 'when there is' or 'if there is' plus 'natural features' (not 'from the nature'). This fixes word order and preposition usage. Suggestion: use concise clauses: 'when there is a river or mountains' or 'if there are natural features.'

× I like to take pictures a lot.

✓ I like taking pictures a lot.

Both 'like to take' and 'like taking' are possible, but 'like taking pictures a lot' sounds more natural in conversation. No major grammar error, but prefer gerund form for habitual actions. Suggestion: use gerund for smoother phrasing.

× Oh I could say about them because I love them because they have their own unique uh unit specialties.

✓ Oh I could say that I love them because they each have their own unique specialties.

Using 'about them' and repeating 'because I love them because' is awkward. 'Each' clarifies plural subjects and 'specialties' is the correct noun. Also remove 'unit' which is incorrect here. Suggestion: say 'they each have their own unique specialties'.

× But I would prefer to views of rural areas because I need to feel fresh air if it is urban areas would be impossible.

✓ But I would prefer views of rural areas because I need to breathe fresh air; being in urban areas would make that impossible.

'Prefer to views' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer views' or 'prefer to view'. The clause about urban areas needs rearrangement: 'if it is urban areas would be impossible' is wrong. Use 'being in urban areas would make that impossible' or 'it's impossible in urban areas.' Suggestion: 'I would prefer views of rural areas because I need to breathe fresh air; being in urban areas would make that impossible.'

× For the views, uh, I am very proud that I am Indonesians because Indonesia has a lot of things here like mountains, rivers, oceans, lakes, ponds, everything here, but except we don't have season, uh, winter season.

✓ Regarding views, I'm very proud to be Indonesian because Indonesia has many natural features like mountains, rivers, oceans, lakes and ponds; however, we do not have a winter season.

'I am Indonesians' mixes singular subject with plural nationality; use 'I'm Indonesian' or 'to be Indonesian.' 'A lot of things here' is vague; 'many natural features' is clearer. 'But except we don't have season, winter season' is ungrammatical—use 'however, we do not have a winter season.' Suggestion: use 'I'm proud to be Indonesian' and 'we do not have a winter season.'

× So I like to experience the broad.

✓ So I would like to experience the cold/winter season.

'Experience the broad' is unclear and likely a wrong word choice; context indicates desire to experience winter. Replace with 'experience the winter season' or 'experience the cold.' Also align modal: use 'would like' to express desire. Suggestion: 'I would like to experience the winter season.'