Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary personal references (e.g., “I'm a girl”) and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains and beaches because I live near the mountains but there aren’t many scenic spots close by, so I like to capture any beautiful scenes I find. Also, I often take a selfie to remember the place.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then support with specific reasons and linking words. Correct vocabulary (use 'prefer urban areas' not 'person area') and grammar (use articles and correct noun forms). Reduce filler sounds and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas. I enjoy the city’s energy and conveniences, such as cafes and public transport, which make the scenery feel lively. Because of that, urban views make me feel connected to modern life.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer and then briefly explain with specific comparisons. Use correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid vague phrases. Mention one or two concrete aspects you like about foreign views.

Ejemplo: Although I love views in my own country, I prefer views in other countries. For instance, I admire scenes in places like Thailand or New York because they offer very modern architecture and vibrant street life, which is different from what I usually see at home.

× I'm a girl so I want to take a picture of different views very much and have a selfie in that too.

✓ I'm a girl, so I want to take pictures of different views and have a selfie in them too.

Use plural 'pictures' and plural reference 'them' because 'different views' implies more than one picture. Also combine clauses with commas and remove 'very much' which is awkward here. Suggestion: replace 'a picture of different views' with 'pictures of different views' and 'a selfie in that' with 'a selfie in them' to match number agreement.

× I like them so much 'cause I live in the mountain but it not have some bit and beautiful view.

✓ I like them so much because I live in the mountains, but they do not have many beautiful views.

Use plural 'mountains' and correct 'there is/are' concept by using 'they do not have' to refer to the mountains. 'It not have' is ungrammatical; use 'they do not have'. Replace 'some bit and beautiful view' with 'many beautiful views' for natural quantification. Also use 'because' instead of ''cause' in formal speech.

× Umm in a different view like mountains or beach.

✓ I mean in different settings, like the mountains or the beach.

Preposition and article usage: use 'in different settings' rather than 'in a different view'. Use 'the mountains' and 'the beach' with definite articles when speaking about these general places. This makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct.

× I prefer of urban area more than rural area because I like the noisy of the city and the convenience of the city too.

✓ I prefer urban areas more than rural ones because I like the noise and convenience of the city.

Remove unnecessary 'of' after 'prefer'. Use plural 'urban areas' and 'rural ones' for comparison. 'The noisy of the city' is incorrect; use the noun 'noise'. This fixes quantifier and noun usage and improves fluency.

× So I prefer a view of the urban 'cause it made me feel like I have a modern life.

✓ So I prefer urban views because they make me feel like I have a modern life.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'it made me feel' mixes past tense with present meaning. Use present 'make' to express a general feeling ('they make me feel'). Use plural 'urban views' and 'they' to match. Replace ''cause' with 'because' for formality.

× In my mind that I will love my countries, but sometime I think about the other countries view like in Thailand or in New York City, I can feel that happen.

✓ In my mind I love my country, but sometimes I think about views in other countries, like Thailand or New York City; I can imagine that life.

Tense and number: 'will love' is unnecessary future; use present 'love' for a general statement. 'My countries' should be 'my country' if referring to the speaker's own nation. Use 'sometimes' (adverb) and 'views in other countries' for correct preposition and plural. 'I can feel that happen' is unnatural; use 'I can imagine that life' meaningfully.

× So I prefer on other countries view.

✓ So I prefer views in other countries.

Use 'prefer' with direct object (no preposition 'on') and 'views in other countries' is the correct prepositional phrase. Use plural 'views' to match general meaning.