Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Correct grammar (tense and article use) and avoid redundancy like “scenery views” or repeated ideas about remembering and posting.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like to capture scenic moments so I can remember special trips, and I often post a few photos on my Instagram to share them with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and linking words, and provide one specific detail or example (e.g., particular building types or atmosphere). Avoid vague phrases like “capture the people eyes.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and skyline. For example, tall skyscrapers and historic city halls create interesting shapes and contrasts that are fun to photograph.

Sugerencia: Make your response more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a direct preference, then give one clear reason with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “however”). Be specific about what is unfamiliar or interesting in other countries instead of vague repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature different architectural styles I haven't seen before. For instance, I find European cathedrals and Asian temples particularly fascinating and unlike buildings in my hometown.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it allows me to capture a scenic moment as well as I love posting it to my Instagram dump account for me to remember that I was once saw this scenery views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they allow me to capture scenic moments, and I also love posting them to my Instagram dump account so I can remember that I once saw these views.

Issues present: subject-verb agreement and number (use 'they' for plural 'pictures'; 'allow' plural), plural forms ('moments', 'views'), article use ('these views' not 'this scenery views'), incorrect verb form 'was saw' should be simple past 'saw' and not combined with 'was', and awkward sentence structure. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and pronouns, use simple past for completed action, and split sentence into clearer clauses. ---

× I prefer views in urban areas because city views has an architecture that can capture the people eyes as well as those tall buildings, business centers and the views.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because city views have architecture that can capture people's attention, as well as tall buildings, business centers, and other landmarks.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('city views have' not 'has'), article and noun choice ('architecture' is uncountable so no 'an', and 'people eyes' should be 'people's attention' or 'people's eyes'), plural and redundancy ('the views' unclear). Suggestion: use plural verb with plural noun, use possessive for people, and choose clearer nouns like 'attention' or 'interest'. ---

× I prefer views in other countries because in my own country as living here for almost 20 years, I captured a lot of different view, scenic travel a lot to see it, while on the other countries I believe that there's a lot of architectural design that not familiar on my eyes.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because, having lived in my own country for almost 20 years, I have seen many different views from my travels; while in other countries I believe there are many architectural designs that are unfamiliar to me.

Multiple issues: tense and aspect (use present perfect 'have seen' for life experience), sentence structure (awkward 'as living here'), article and plural ('a lot of different view' -> 'many different views'), incorrect phrase 'scenic travel a lot to see it' unclear so replaced with 'from my travels', preposition and adjective order ('unfamiliar to me' not 'not familiar on my eyes'), and misuse of 'the other countries' -> 'other countries'. Suggestion: use participial phrase 'having lived' to explain background, use present perfect for experiences, use plural nouns and correct prepositions ('unfamiliar to me'), and simplify sentence for clarity.