Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates the main idea but has repetition and minor grammatical errors. Make the response more concise, correct mistakes, and add one specific supporting detail. Use up to five sentences, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked reason or example (use linking words like "because" or "for example").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I find landscapes beautiful and want to preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the coast to remember my trips and the changing colors of the sky.

Sugerencia: This answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a full topic sentence stating your preference, then give at least one specific reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for instance", "also") and avoid sentence fragments.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architectural variety of cities. For instance, I like photographing city skylines and vibrant street scenes that show contrast between old and new buildings.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains hesitations. Decide on a clear preference, state it in a topic sentence, and provide a specific reason or example. Keep sentences complete and use linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid filler phrases and correct pronoun use.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultural landscapes and unique architecture. For example, when I visited Japan I photographed traditional temples and modern cityscapes, which felt very different from the scenery at home.

× Yes, I love taking picture pictures of different views because I find it beautiful and I want to preserve memories of places I have visited.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I find them beautiful and I want to preserve memories of places I have visited.

Problems: 'picture pictures' duplicates and should be 'pictures' (plural) to match 'views'; 'it' incorrectly refers to 'views' (plural) so must be 'them'. Suggestion: remove duplication, use plural nouns consistently and ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× I prefer views in urban areas because. It is more.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they are more interesting.

Problems: sentence fragment 'because.' leaves an incomplete clause; 'It is more.' is vague and 'it' doesn't refer clearly. Suggestion: complete the because-clause with a clear adjective and make pronoun agree with 'views' (plural) by using 'they' and a comparative adjective like 'more interesting'.

× I prefer views in my in our in other country because I'm so frustrated in my.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I'm so frustrated with my own.

Problems: 'in my in our in other country' is confused and ungrammatical; use either 'my' or 'our' and plural 'countries' if contrasting; 'frustrated in my' is incomplete and should be 'frustrated with my own' to show dissatisfaction with one's own country's views. Suggestion: choose correct possessive pronoun and complete the comparison with clear preposition 'with' and noun 'own'.