Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答自然但有赘词与犹豫音（例如“you know”，“uh”，“umm”）影响流利度；句子略长且结构重复。建议：在回答时去掉填充词，使用一到两句清晰的主题句加一至两个具体细节支持；用连接词（for example, also）增强连贯性，并提供更具体的例子（如拍摄场景、感受或拍摄目的）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph my mother’s portrait in natural light and take close-up shots of the green trees and flowers near my home. Photography helps me relax and preserve beautiful scenery as memories.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但存在多次犹豫与语法错误（如“one of the main reason”应为“reasons”；“when I have a city work”表达不自然）。建议：用一到两句准确陈述偏好，随后给出两三个具体原因并用恰当的连接词，注意语法和常用搭配（sense of belonging, city life, modern architecture）。去掉重复词汇和填充音。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and feel at home there. I enjoy looking at skyscrapers and modern architecture, and city scenes give me a lively atmosphere and a strong sense of belonging.

Sugerencia: 回答内容明确且感情真挚，但表达有重复且有填充词，部分短语不够地道（例如“there's some connection between me and my own country”可更自然表述）。建议：简洁陈述偏好并给出具体例子或原因（文化、回忆、熟悉感），使用自然搭配（stronger sense of belonging, familiar landscapes），避免重复相同意思的句子。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they give me a stronger sense of belonging and remind me of childhood memories. For instance, I love watching the familiar coastal scenery and traditional countryside landscapes that feel comforting and unique to my culture.

× I love to take portraits for my mom and taking some other pictures for the green trees and flowers which I enjoy to see every day.

✓ I love taking portraits of my mom and taking other pictures of the green trees and flowers that I enjoy seeing every day.

原句混用了不定式（to take）和动名词（taking），结构不一致，导致表达不自然。建议将两个并列动作都用动名词形式（taking），并把介词搭配改为更自然的“take pictures of”。另外把定语从句中动词改为现在分词seeing以符合进行中的习惯表达。

× And a photography is also a good way to help me memorize a good scenery.

✓ And photography is also a good way to help me remember a beautiful scene.

“a photography”用法不当，photography 作不可数名词不用冠词；“memorize”通常用于记忆具体信息，描述记住景色应使用remember；“good scenery”搭配不自然，改为“beautiful scene”。建议学习可数/不可数名词和动词词义搭配。

× To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas. Umm, uh, one of the main reason of that is I grew up in urban areas, so I really enjoy the scenery of the skyscrapers, uh, and the modern buildings.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas. Umm, uh, one of the main reasons for that is I grew up in urban areas, so I really enjoy the scenery of the skyscrapers and the modern buildings.

原句中“one of the main reason”中 reason 应为复数 reasons，因为短语构成为“one of the + 复数名词”。另外习惯用法是“one of the main reasons for that”。建议记住“one of the + 复数名词”结构。

× Uh, when I have a city work, I can possess a sense of belonging.

✓ Uh, when I have city work, I can feel a sense of belonging.

原句“have a city work”搭配错误，英语中不说“have a city work”；“possess a sense of belonging”虽然可理解，但更自然的表达是“feel a sense of belonging”。建议用常见搭配“feel a sense of belonging”或“have a sense of belonging”。

× Definitely, I prefer views in my own country, you know, umm, it can bring me much stronger sense of belonging and there's some connection between me and my own country.

✓ Definitely, I prefer views in my own country. You know, it can give me a much stronger sense of belonging and there's some connection between me and my country.

原句缺少冠词“a”在“much stronger sense of belonging”前；另外“between me and my own country”中“my own country”可简化为“my country”。建议注意冠词使用和更自然的短语搭配（give/bring a sense）。

× And I really enjoy, uh, to see the wonderful and spectacular landscape in my own country.

✓ And I really enjoy seeing the wonderful and spectacular landscapes in my own country.

动词 enjoy 后应接动名词（enjoy seeing），不能接不定式（to see）。此外 landscape 在此处可用复数 landscapes 更符合语境。建议记住 enjoy 后用动名词的规则。