Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular and verb forms), avoid hesitation words, and add one specific example to support your point. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. It helps me remember special moments and the places I visit, and it also lets me express my creativity. For example, when I traveled to the mountains last year, I took photos of the sunrise which brought back great memories whenever I look at them.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear preference or balanced view, avoid repetition and vague phrases. Provide a specific reason and an example, and use a linking word to connect your reason.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but if I had to choose I prefer urban areas because I like experiencing local culture and architecture. For instance, in cities I enjoy photographing markets and historic buildings, while in the countryside I focus more on landscapes and nature.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary when comparing countries. Start with a direct answer, give specific reasons (e.g., climate, scenery), and avoid fillers. Add a short example of a foreign view you liked.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my country is hot year-round and has limited scenic variety. For example, I loved the coastal scenery in Portugal — the cooler climate and dramatic cliffs made the views much more interesting to photograph.

× Absolutely yes. I love taking picture uh, because it's, it helps me to remember the moments or the places I traveled and it's give me my time to express my, uh, hobby.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I love taking pictures because they help me remember the moments and the places I have traveled, and they give me time to express my hobby.

Errors: singular/plural and pronoun reference and verb agreement. 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (Quantifier/plural). 'it's, it helps' is awkward; use 'they help' to refer to pictures (Incorrect use of pronouns/subject-verb agreement). 'the moments or the places I traveled' -> 'remember the moments and the places I have traveled' uses present perfect to link past travel to present memory. 'it's give me' -> 'they give me' corrects verb agreement. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match the activity, use consistent pronouns referring to those nouns, and choose correct tense (present perfect) for past experiences related to the present.

× Actually, I like visiting both because I prefer to see different cultures and countries. I like to see everything in the world I I love.

✓ Actually, I like visiting both because I prefer seeing different cultures and countries. I like to see everything in the world that I love.

Errors: awkward repetition and sentence fragmentation. 'I prefer to see' is acceptable but 'prefer seeing' is more natural here (verb form choice). The second sentence 'I like to see everything in the world I I love' contains a duplicated 'I' and missing connector; it should be 'that I love' to modify 'everything'. Suggestion: remove repetition, use correct relative clause 'that I love', and keep verb forms consistent.

× To be honest, in our country we didn't have a too much views because of the weather. We actually have uh, hot weather all over the year. So I prefer uh, another countries.

✓ To be honest, in our country we don't have too many views because of the weather. We actually have hot weather all year round. So I prefer other countries.

Errors: incorrect tense and quantifier and article/number agreement. 'we didn't have a too much views' should be present tense 'we don't have' (present tense to describe a general truth) and 'too much' is for uncountable nouns; use 'too many views' (quantifier). 'all over the year' is unnatural; use 'all year round'. 'another countries' is incorrect: 'another' is for singular; use 'other countries'. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers for countable nouns, match tense to general facts, and use 'other' for plural nouns.