Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “photos of songs”) and tense/number errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and remember places I have visited. For example, when I travel I often take landscape photos of beaches or mountains, and later I make photo albums to share with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to compare urban and rural views, and give specific examples. Fix unclear phrases like “big sea for someone” and “because of the lie.”

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and natural, which helps me relax after a busy period. However, I also like cityscapes at night for their bright lights and lively atmosphere; for example, I enjoy walking along a lit-up riverside in the evening.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and maintain grammatical consistency (singular/plural, verb forms). Use linking words to contrast preferences and include one precise example with past-tense consistency.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. For instance, when I visited a coastal town in Spain, I loved the clear sea and historic buildings, whereas at home I often visit nearby mountains for quiet weekends.

× Well I yes I like taking pictures of different view.

✓ Well, yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The original sentence has extra words and missing plural. 'I yes I' is redundant; choose one interjection 'yes'. 'Different view' should be plural 'different views' to match 'pictures of'. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'I' and use plural 'views' and add commas for natural speech.

× I finally relaxed and it helps me remember place that I've visited.

✓ I feel relaxed and it helps me remember places that I've visited.

Tense and word choice errors: 'finally relaxed' implies a completed past action; in context present habit use 'feel relaxed'. 'place' should be plural 'places' to match remembering multiple visits. Keep present perfect 'I've visited' for past experiences. Suggestion: use 'feel relaxed' and pluralize 'places'.

× So I often take photos of songs to and maybe some random photo dumps when I travel a lot.

✓ So I often take photos of scenes, too, and sometimes make random photo dumps when I travel a lot.

'songs' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'scenes'. 'to' should be 'too' meaning also. 'maybe some' better as 'sometimes make' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: replace 'songs' with 'scenes', 'to' with 'too', and restructure latter part.

× Well, I mostly prefer rural view, they're more peaceful and natural and they help me relax after a big sea for someone.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer rural views; they're more peaceful and natural and they help me relax after a busy day, for example.

'rural view' should be plural 'rural views' to match general preference. The clause 'after a big sea for someone' is incorrect; likely meant 'after a busy day' or similar. I replaced with 'busy day, for example' to make sense. Suggestion: use plural for general categories and use appropriate idiom for tiredness.

× I like going to the countryside to see views and the lakes, but sometimes I also enjoy the city views at night because of the lie.

✓ I like going to the countryside to see lakes and views, but sometimes I also enjoy the city views at night because of the lights.

Word order and word choice: 'to see views and the lakes' is awkward — 'see lakes and views' is clearer. 'lie' is a typo for 'lights'. Suggestion: correct word order and typos to convey intended meaning.

× Well, I prefer views in other country because I like seeing different landscapes and culture and it feels so exciting to discover new places.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries because I like seeing different landscapes and cultures and it feels exciting to discover new places.

'other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally. 'culture' should be plural 'cultures' to match 'different landscapes'. 'so exciting' is acceptable but 'exciting' is more natural here. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when referring to general differences across nations.

× For example, when I visited the coastal town in Spain, I love the clear sea and old buildings.

✓ For example, when I visited a coastal town in Spain, I loved the clear sea and the old buildings.

Sequence of tenses: main clause is past 'when I visited', so descriptions of that visit should be past tense 'I loved'. Also include article 'a' before 'coastal town' and 'the' before 'old buildings' for specificity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use appropriate articles.

× I also enjoy peaceful mountain views at home when I need to relax.

✓ I also enjoy peaceful mountain views at home when I need to relax.

This sentence is already correct. It uses present simple to describe a habitual preference and 'when I need to relax' correctly indicates condition. No change necessary.