Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn; tránh lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'found' -> 'fond', 'landscape' số nhiều/đếm được), rút gọn câu dài và dùng liên từ phù hợp. Ngoài ra, thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể để minh họa (ví dụ: nơi chụp, cảm xúc) sẽ làm câu trả lời thêm thuyết phục.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I'm quite fond of taking photos of beautiful scenery, especially when I travel to new places. For example, last summer I photographed the terraced rice fields in Sapa, and the colors and atmosphere there always remind me of that trip.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ cho chính xác; tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh và lỗi như 'replace' (nên là 'reflect') và 'You better to choose one I' (không rõ nghĩa). Dùng liên từ để liên kết lý do và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi lựa chọn.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I like both for different reasons. Urban views are exciting because they reflect modern life and offer many attractions, such as tall buildings and busy streets. On the other hand, rural landscapes feel quieter and more refreshing, like peaceful rice fields where I can relax.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi đại từ, số nhiều/ít và cấu trúc câu; tránh các cụm từ mơ hồ như 'vibrancy' đứng riêng. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu vài ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm trong nước và lý do tại sao chúng có ý nghĩa với bạn.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and meaningful. For example, Vietnam offers diverse scenery, from peaceful beaches in Da Nang to the lush mountains of Sapa, and visiting these places brings back family memories.

× I am quite found taking photos of beautiful scenery especially when I travel or visit the new place.

✓ I am quite fond of taking photos of beautiful scenery, especially when I travel or visit new places.

'found' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fond' and it requires the preposition 'of'. Also 'the new place' is unnatural here; use 'new places' to match general meaning and pluralize to be natural.

× I enjoy capturing landscape like mountain, lake or city skyline because they remind me of memorable experience even though I am not a professional photographer.

✓ I enjoy capturing landscapes like mountains, lakes, or city skylines because they remind me of memorable experiences, even though I am not a professional photographer.

Countable nouns 'landscape', 'mountain', 'lake', 'city skyline', and 'memorable experience' should be plural when referring to types or examples. Use plural forms and add commas for clarity.

× To be honest, I like both, but for different reasons. Urban views are exciting because they replace modern life and offer plenty of things to see. On the other hand, rural landscapes are much quieter and more refreshing. You better to choose one I.

✓ To be honest, I like both for different reasons. Urban views are exciting because they reflect modern life and offer plenty of things to see. On the other hand, rural landscapes are much quieter and more refreshing. You cannot choose just one for me.

'replace modern life' is wrong verb choice; 'reflect' fits the meaning. 'You better to choose one I' is ungrammatical and unclear. If the student meant they cannot choose one, a clear correction is 'You cannot choose just one for me.' Adjust sentence structure and pronouns accordingly.

× Yours is my own country because they are more familiar and meaningful to me.

✓ Mine is my own country because it is more familiar and meaningful to me.

Pronoun misuse: 'Yours' refers to the examiner, not the student. Use 'Mine'. Also 'they' disagrees with singular 'country'; use 'it'.

× Vietnam has a wide variety of stunning landscapes from beautiful beach and lush mountain to vibrancy.

✓ Vietnam has a wide variety of stunning landscapes, from beautiful beaches and lush mountains to vibrant cities.

Use plural forms for countable nouns 'beach' and 'mountain'. 'Vibrancy' is a noun that doesn't parallel 'beaches' and 'mountains'; use 'vibrant cities' to express the intended idea.

× I also enjoy exploring place that are close to homes in small.

✓ I also enjoy exploring places that are close to home and small towns nearby.

'place' should be plural 'places'; 'that are close to homes in small' is ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: 'close to home' and 'small towns nearby' convey the intended idea.