Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, clear and natural. Start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then give 1–2 brief specific reasons using linking words. Avoid pauses, repetition and unclear words. Focus on vocabulary like “take photos”, “views”, “memories”, “scenery”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me keep memories and relax my mind. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel, so I can look back at them later and remember the moment.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the preference, then add a linked reason and a specific detail. Use correct grammar for preferences (e.g., “I prefer rural areas”) and plural/singular forms (“mountains”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and help me relax. For instance, when I visit the countryside I enjoy looking at green fields and mountains, and listening to birds, which makes me feel calm.

Sugerencia: Answer directly using present simple (e.g., “I prefer”), give one clear reason, and provide a specific example. Avoid awkward phrasing like “use other the countries” and repetition. Use vocabulary such as “different scenery”, “unique architecture”, or “cultural landscapes.”

Ejemplo: At the moment I prefer views in other countries because they offer different scenery and cultural landmarks. For example, I love visiting Europe to see historic buildings and unique landscapes that I can't find at home.

× How are ya attacking picture for different views? Cause I want to have a memories from different views and I for my for my mind to **** *** mind.

✓ How are you taking pictures of different views? I want to have memories of different views for my mind.

Multiple sentence structure problems: 'How are ya attacking picture' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'How are you taking pictures' (verb choice and form). 'Attacking' is incorrect verb choice. 'ya' is informal; use 'you'. 'Cause' as sentence start is informal; use 'Because' or rephrase. 'a memories' mixes singular article with plural noun; correct to 'memories' without 'a'. 'from different views' should be 'of different views' (incorrect preposition - see ID 11 but main issue is structure). 'I for my for my mind to **** *** mind' is ungrammatical and unclear; interpreted as 'for my mind' and cleaned to 'for my mind'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order, choose correct verbs (take pictures), use correct articles and prepositions, and avoid repetitions.

× Umm well I for previous in rural areas because they are because they are peaceful of me and I find nature relaxing.

✓ Umm well I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful for me and I find nature relaxing.

Errors: 'I for previous in rural areas' mixes words; intended 'I prefer rural areas' (verb selection and order). 'peaceful of me' uses incorrect preposition; correct is 'peaceful for me' or 'peaceful to me'. This is a preposition error (ID 11). Also repeated phrase 'because they are' is redundant (sentence structure). Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference, use 'for' or 'to' with feelings (peaceful for me), and avoid redundancy.

× When I visit the countryside I enjoy looking at green fields and mountain.

✓ When I visit the countryside, I enjoy looking at green fields and mountains.

Error: 'green fields and mountain' mixes plural and singular; should be plural 'mountains' to agree with 'fields' and general meaning. This is subject-verb/noun number agreement (ID 27/1). Suggestion: use consistent pluralization when listing multiple items and add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity.

× As of now, I preferred use other the countries or outside the countries because other countries it's a different views and a beautiful beauty, beauty use and they have a they they have a.

✓ As of now, I prefer to visit other countries because they have different and beautiful views.

Errors: 'I preferred use other the countries' uses past tense 'preferred' incorrectly for a current preference; change to present 'I prefer' (ID 6 Present tense issue/ID 7 Future tense issue). 'use other the countries' is ungrammatical; intended 'other countries' or 'outside my country'. 'other countries it's a different views' mixes subject-verb and number: 'it's' + 'views' (singular verb with plural noun)—use 'they have different views'. 'a beautiful beauty, beauty use' is redundant and incorrect word choice. Overall sentence structure is broken. Suggestion: use present tense for current preferences, correct word order 'other countries', use plural agreement 'they have different and beautiful views', and avoid repetitions.