Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar and use specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix article/plural errors (e.g. 'a lots' → 'a lot of' or 'many').

Ejemplo: Yes — I enjoy taking photos of different kinds of views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and nearby nature trails where I can capture wildlife and plants. This variety keeps photography interesting for me.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the preference, correct repetition and word choice, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'the latter 1' and correct grammar ('grew grew', 'taking the countryside areas').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and traditional farms, and I find the natural scenery more varied and peaceful than the city.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then two clear reasons with linking words. Fix repetitions ('taking picture taking') and use more natural phrasing for being unfamiliar in foreign countries (e.g. 'feel less familiar' or 'might get lost'). Add a brief example to illustrate the point.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the locations and feel a personal connection to them. For example, I can visit local landmarks I grew up near and capture memories, whereas in other countries I might struggle to find meaningful spots or feel less familiar with the context.

× Yes, I would like to take a lots of pictures of different scenarios like the environment or the city landscapes or and maybe the wildlife animals plant in my free time.

✓ Yes, I would like to take a lot of pictures of different scenes such as the environment, city landscapes, and maybe wildlife and plants in my free time.

Error type 14: 'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of' or simply 'lots of'. Also 'scenarios' is awkward for photos; 'scenes' or 'landscapes' fits better. 'the wildlife animals plant' is an incorrect list and word choice; separate into 'wildlife and plants' or 'wildlife, animals, and plants'. Improve parallel structure and remove extra conjunction 'or and'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' and keep parallel noun forms when listing items.

× Well I grew grew up in our rural areas so I prefer taking the countryside areas and I think it has a lot of things to explore and then naturally natural beauty always attracts me so I prefer the latter 1.

✓ Well, I grew up in a rural area, so I prefer the countryside; I think it has many things to explore, and natural beauty always attracts me, so I prefer the latter.

Error type 9: repeated 'grew grew' is a typo; use single past participle 'grew up' (past tense verb, not participle error per se but fits list). Also issues with articles and plurality: 'our rural areas' is odd for a personal statement — 'a rural area' or 'the countryside' is better. 'taking the countryside areas' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer the countryside'. 'has a lot of things' -> 'has many things' for countable plural. Removed extraneous 'then' and 'natural' repeated. Number '1' is unnecessary. Suggestion: fix repetition, use appropriate article 'a' or 'the', ensure noun number agreement and natural collocations.

× Well, I think I prefer taking picture taking views of my own country because I know the location and there is a familiarity in those places and I can easily connect to them.

✓ Well, I think I prefer taking pictures of my own country because I know the locations, I am familiar with those places, and I can easily connect with them.

Error type 6: tense and verb form and noun number problems: 'taking picture taking views' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'taking pictures' or 'photographing views'. 'the location' is too specific; use plural 'locations' if referring to multiple places. 'there is a familiarity in those places' is awkward—use 'I am familiar with those places'. Use 'connect with' rather than 'connect to' in this context. Suggestion: simplify verb phrases, ensure noun forms (singular/plural) match meaning, and use natural verbs and prepositions.

× Whereas for the foreign countries I could not understand or maybe lost in them.

✓ Whereas in foreign countries, I might not understand the culture or might get lost there.

Error type 5: incorrect tense/modal usage and sentence structure: 'I could not understand or maybe lost in them' mixes past modal 'could' with present possibility and omits a verb for 'lost' (should be 'might get lost' or 'be lost'). Also 'for the foreign countries' is awkward; use 'in foreign countries'. Clarify what is not understood (culture, language, directions). Suggestion: use consistent modal verbs for possibility ('might') and include correct verb forms ('get lost' or 'become lost').