Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, use clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and unclear phrases (‘the item will’). Use linking words to add details and keep within 3–4 sentences. For example, state directly that you enjoy taking photos, give 1–2 specific reasons (angles, creativity, sharing), and finish with where you share them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because experimenting with angles helps me capture more interesting compositions. For instance, I often try low and high angles to make scenes look more dramatic, and then I share my best shots on Instagram and TikTok.

Sugerencia: Avoid one-word answers. Give a clear preference or say you like both and explain why. Use a topic sentence, then provide 1–2 supporting reasons and an example. This shows language control and adds content.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the contrast of architecture and busy streets. For example, skyscrapers and neon lights create interesting photo subjects, and I like capturing how people interact with the city.

Sugerencia: Make the preference clear and support it with specific details. Avoid hesitation and grammatical errors (e.g., say “I prefer views in other countries” and use correct structures: “Italy has many beautiful coastal views”). Use linking words (‘for example’, ‘because’) and finish the sentence with a concrete detail or experience.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, I love Italy for its coastal scenery and historic towns, and I enjoy photographing seaside villages and ancient architecture there.

× Yes uh so that the item will take a picture in different views because umm I can experience with different angles like to get a pretty bad perfect shot and I can share on my social media like tiktok Instagram, also I can.

✓ Yes. I like taking pictures of different views because I can experiment with different angles to get a great shot, and I can share them on my social media like TikTok and Instagram.

Error type 8: The original sentence used phrases like 'experience with' and 'to get a pretty bad perfect shot' which are incorrect. Use the gerund 'taking' after 'like'. Use 'experiment with' (not 'experience with') to mean trying different angles. 'To get' is correct infinitive form for purpose. Replace the contradictory 'pretty bad perfect' with a single clear adjective 'great'. 'Share them' uses the plural pronoun to refer back to 'pictures'. Also capitalize proper nouns (TikTok, Instagram). Suggestions: Use gerunds after 'like', use 'experiment with' for trying methods, and ensure adjectives accurately convey meaning.

× I don't know.

✓ I am not sure.

Error type 26: The short answer 'I don't know' is grammatically correct but can be improved to better fit the context of preference questions. 'I am not sure' is a more natural, polite response to a question about preference. Suggestion: Use fuller responses in speaking tests to show language ability.

× I think I do prefer views in other countries. Uh, for example, I very like to view in Italy because at Italy it have also many beautiful views like the the oceans and.

✓ I think I prefer views in other countries. For example, I really like visiting Italy because it also has many beautiful views, such as the ocean.

Error type 11: Problems include unnecessary 'do' in 'I do prefer' (not required), incorrect verb 'very like' (use 'really like' or 'enjoy'), incorrect preposition 'at Italy' (use 'in Italy'), subject-verb agreement 'it have' (should be 'it has'), and plural problems 'the the oceans' (use 'the ocean' or 'oceans'). Suggestions: Omit unnecessary auxiliaries, use 'really' for emphasis, use 'in' for countries, match singular/plural and verb forms (it has), and avoid duplicated words.