Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct mistakes (e.g., 'I read' unnecessary; 'a 2 digital cameras' → 'two digital cameras'; 'fall off amazing videos' unclear). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me appreciate nature. For example, I often use my two digital cameras to capture landscapes in Butterworth, where the scenery is very beautiful.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then support with a specific reason and an example. Avoid contradictory phrases ('both or one and rural') and unclear comparisons ('nature is important over nurture' misused). Use linking words like 'however' or 'because'.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer more natural landscapes and peaceful scenes. For instance, rural parks and coastlines provide quieter, more photogenic settings than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then contrast with reasons and a specific example. Avoid informal phrases like 'I'm not gonna lie' and vague comparisons ('way way better than them'). Correct grammar ('Philippines have' → 'the Philippines has'; name of places correctly). Use linking words such as 'but' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit other countries, but I prefer views in the Philippines because it has many unique natural sites. For example, we have active volcanoes and historic places like the Manila Cathedral that offer striking scenery.

× And in fact I have a 2 digital cameras that fall off amazing videos because Butterworth is very, very beautiful.

✓ And in fact I have two digital cameras that take amazing videos because Butterworth is very, very beautiful.

Use the correct quantifier/form for numbers and correct verb choice. 'a 2 digital cameras' mixes an article with a numeral and plural noun; write 'two digital cameras'. 'fall off amazing videos' is incorrect verb and collocation; use 'take amazing videos' to describe recording. Also write numbers in words for small numbers in formal speech.

× I really like taking pictures of both or one and rural but I prefer more the urban areas because I like nature.

✓ I really like taking pictures of both urban and rural areas, but I prefer urban areas more because I like nature.

The original has incorrect ordering and preposition use: 'both or one and rural' is ungrammatical. Use 'both urban and rural areas' to list two types. Place 'more' after the verb phrase or use 'prefer ... more'. Use commas to separate clauses.

× I am very fond of nature because I think it's a gift from God and I hope people realize that nature is important over nurture.

✓ I am very fond of nature because I think it's a gift from God, and I hope people realize that nature is more important than nurture.

The phrase 'important over nurture' is incorrect comparison structure. Use 'more important than' when comparing two things. Also add a comma before 'and' linking two independent clauses.

× I'm not gonna lie, I am dreaming of going to other countries to see the attractions there but Philippines is way way better than them because Philippines have many natural resources.

✓ I'm not going to lie, I dream of going to other countries to see the attractions there, but the Philippines is way better because it has many natural resources.

Use standard future/continuity forms: 'gonna' is informal; 'I'm not going to lie' is better. 'I am dreaming' is awkward; use 'I dream of' or 'I would like to'. Country names require the definite article 'the Philippines'. 'Philippines have' is subject-verb agreement error; use singular verb 'is' for the country name phrase and 'it has' for possession.

× We have my own volcano, Manawa church and many more.

✓ We have our own volcano, the Mayon Volcano, the Miagao Church, and many more attractions.

'We have my own volcano' uses incorrect pronoun; use 'our' or 'the' for national features. Proper nouns should be accurate and include articles if needed: 'the Mayon Volcano' or name as appropriate. 'Manawa church' is likely incorrect name; replace with correct examples and list items clearly using commas and 'and'.