Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và chính xác ngữ pháp. Tránh lỗi từ vựng sai (ví dụ "laurels", "white", "Naija", "you" không phù hợp) và diễn đạt lủng củng. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về những gì bạn chụp (ví dụ: cảnh quan, kiến trúc, con người) và nơi chụp. Dùng liên từ như "for example" hoặc "for instance" để nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel to cities I photograph historic buildings and busy streets, while in the countryside I focus on landscapes and local people. These photos help me remember the atmosphere of each place.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (urban or rural) và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: "urban areas", "rural areas", "open spaces"). Tránh sai ngữ pháp như "it's have" và từ không phù hợp như "deals". Mô tả cụ thể lý do với 1-2 chi tiết và dùng liên từ (e.g. "because", "for example").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy open spaces and natural scenery. For example, I like wide fields and quiet trails, which feel peaceful and are great for taking photos.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ "it makes me feel excited/curious" thay vì "strange"). Nên giải thích lý do cụ thể: văn hóa khác, kiến trúc mới, hoặc cảnh quan độc đáo. Bắt đầu bằng một câu trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng với một ví dụ. Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they introduce me to different cultures and landscapes. For example, seeing traditional markets or unfamiliar architecture abroad makes me feel curious and inspired to learn more.

× Yes, I enjoy taking picture of different view.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking more than one picture of various views. Use plural form 'pictures' and 'views' when referring to multiple items. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when you mean more than one (e.g., 'pictures', 'views').

× I take laurels for the white travelling to different place in the world.

✓ I take photos while traveling to different places around the world.

The original sentence uses incorrect words ('laurels', 'white') and wrong noun forms ('place') and awkward structure. 'Take photos' is the correct collocation; use gerund/participle 'traveling' and plural 'places'. Suggestion: Use accurate vocabulary and correct pluralization, and structure the sentence as 'I take photos while traveling to different places around the world.'

× What is for example when I traveling to Naija and I take a lot of picture of you in this city.

✓ For example, when I travel to Naija I take a lot of pictures of the city.

Use base form 'travel' after 'when' for present/future reference, not 'traveling'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures'. 'of you in this city' is incorrect pronoun and reference; use 'of the city' to refer to the place. Suggestion: Use 'when I travel' for habitual actions and correct plural nouns and noun phrases (e.g., 'pictures of the city').

× I prefer deals in open area because it will modern and very beautiful.

✓ I prefer scenes in open areas because they are modern and very beautiful.

'Deals' is incorrect word choice; 'scenes' or 'views' fits better. Preposition 'in open area' should be 'in open areas'. 'It will modern' is wrong: use plural subject 'they' with 'are' and adjective 'modern'. Suggestion: Use correct noun ('scenes'/'views'), pluralize 'areas', and match verb to subject: 'they are modern'.

× I especially like the view in open because it is very special.

✓ I especially like the views in open areas because they are very special.

'the view in open' is awkward; use plural 'views' and 'open areas'. Also match subject and verb: 'they are' instead of 'it is' when referring to multiple views. Suggestion: Use plural nouns consistently and ensure subject-verb agreement ('views... they are').

× It's have day out feature.

✓ It has a day-out feature.

The contraction 'It's' (it is) cannot be followed by 'have'. Use 'has' for third person singular possession. Add hyphen or phrase 'day-out' and indefinite article 'a' to indicate one feature. Suggestion: Use 'has' for possession with it: 'It has a day-out feature.'

× I prefer views in other countries because it make me feel strange.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they make me feel strange.

Subject 'views' is plural, so verb must be 'make' not 'make' confusion: original used 'make' but had 'it'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'views'. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun agrees with its antecedent: 'views... they make me feel...'.