Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答自然，有表达热情和具体偏好，但存在语法错误、停顿词（you know, uh）过多、句子冗长且不够连贯。建议：1) 减少填充词，使用简洁句子；2) 使用清晰的主题句并跟随1-2个具体细节（例如时间、地点或原因）；3) 注意语法和搭配，如 “rooftop views” 和 “at night”。练习用2-3个连词（for example, such as, because）使语意连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoy photographing different views when I travel because I want to remember special moments. For example, I often stop to capture a colorful sunrise or the rooftops and city skyline at night. These scenes mesmerize me, so I like to keep a visual record.

Sugerencia: 回答表达清楚偏好，但语言不够简练且有多余填充词和语法问题（例如 “prefer to living” 应为 “prefer living” 或 “prefer to live”）。建议：1) 开头直接给出主题句，例如 “I prefer urban views.”；2) 用2-3个具体原因和例子支撑（architecture, skyline, night lights）；3) 避免重复和口语填充词，保持句子简短。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I love modern architecture and dramatic city skylines. For instance, I enjoy photographing illuminated streets and complex bridges at night, which create interesting compositions. These features suit my style more than rural scenes.

Sugerencia: 回答给出了理由（经济和自豪感），但表达不流利，包含重复、语法错误和不自然的搭配（例如 “cheap and affordable to travel at my own country”，“a sense of pride of. Of my own country loving”）。建议：1) 使用清晰的主题句并列出两点支持理由；2) 用正确搭配如 “travel in my own country” 和 “feel proud of my country”；3) 把句子控制在最多三句内，避免重复。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because travelling there is usually more affordable and convenient. Also, many local landscapes make me feel proud of my culture and heritage. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional villages and historic sites that reflect my country’s identity.

× Yes, of course I enjoy photographing different views that in front of me you know, whenever I travel, I would like to stop and capture what I've seen just now and you know like the uh feels a sunrise the rooftops views in city and the. Buying a night, they all attracts me a lot. I was so mesmerized by all kind of scenery, so I want to keep a record of them.

✓ Yes, of course I enjoy photographing different views in front of me. Whenever I travel, I like to stop and capture what I have just seen, like the feeling of a sunrise, the rooftop views in the city, and the evening scenes; they all attract me a lot. I am so mesmerized by all kinds of scenery, so I want to keep a record of them.

句子中需要使用動名詞或完成時表達動作： 1) 去掉多餘的 'that'，應直接說 'views in front of me'，更自然。 2) 將 'would like to stop and capture what I've seen just now' 改為現在習慣用 'like to stop and capture what I have just seen'，保持時態一致且語義清晰（完成時表示剛看到的）。 3) 'feels a sunrise' 應為 'the feeling of a sunrise'（名詞短語表達感受）；'the rooftops views in city' 改為 'the rooftop views in the city'（冠詞與形容順序）。 4) 'Buying a night' 是錯誤片段，應改為 'the evening scenes' 或 'the night scenes'；並將 'they all attracts me' 改為 'they all attract me'（主動詞與主語一致）。 5) 'I was so mesmerized by all kind of scenery' 中 'all kind' 應為複數 'all kinds of'，且若想表達現在仍然喜歡，改為現在時 'I am so mesmerized'。 改進建議（簡中）： - 注意動詞形式與時態的一致性，描述習慣性行為用一般現在時；剛發生的動作用現在完成時。 - 常用固定搭配如 'the feeling of', 'rooftop views', 'all kinds of'。 - 刪掉口語填充詞（如 you know, uh）以提高表達清晰度。

× They, they're also attractive to me, you know, sometimes, uh, just prefer to living, umm. The modern life rather than the countryside lives, so when it comes to photography I will probably also choose the urban areas.

✓ They are also attractive to me. Sometimes I just prefer living the modern life rather than country life, so when it comes to photography I will probably also choose urban areas.

錯誤與主語-動詞一致及名詞使用有關： 1) 將口語破碎句整理為完整句子 'They are also attractive to me.'，避免重複 'They, they're'。 2) 'just prefer to living' 應為 'just prefer living' 或 'prefer to live'，動詞搭配要正確。 3) 'the modern life rather than the countryside lives' 中 'lives' 用錯，應為不可數或名詞短語 'country life'（不可用複數）。 改進建議（簡中）： - 注意動詞 'prefer' 的常見用法：可以接動名詞（prefer doing）或不定式（prefer to do）。 - 'life' 在表示生活方式時通常用不可數或單數形式，如 'modern life'、'country life'。 - 句子保持簡潔，避免口語重複和填充詞。

× Absolutely. The views in my own country, you know, sometimes it's, it's so cheap and affordable to travel at my own country. Sometimes it's really expensive to travel abroad. And plus the views in my own country is so mesmerizing that I could feel a sense of pride of. Of my own country loving.

✓ Absolutely. The views in my own country are great. Sometimes it is cheap and affordable to travel within my country, while it is really expensive to travel abroad. Also, the views in my country are so mesmerizing that I feel a sense of pride in my country.

本段存在時態與主謂一致、介詞和句子結構錯誤： 1) 'The views in my own country ... it's' 主語 'views' 為複數，動詞應用複數 'are'。 2) 'to travel at my own country' 介詞錯誤，應為 'within my country' 或 'in my country'。 3) 'the views in my own country is' 再次出現主謂不一致，應為 'are'。 4) 'I could feel a sense of pride of. Of my own country loving.' 結構混亂，正確表達為 'I feel a sense of pride in my country'，不使用 'loving' 作為名詞。 改進建議（簡中）： - 主語為複數（views）時要用複數動詞 'are'。 - 表達 '在本國旅行' 用 'in/within my country'，不要用 'at'。 - 用簡潔自然的表達 'feel a sense of pride in my country'，避免多餘片段和錯誤詞形。