Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Organize your response into a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting sentences. Reduce repetition and correct basic grammar (verb forms, articles). Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) and give one specific example (e.g. mountains at sunrise) to make your answer more concrete and natural. Keep it to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph mountain landscapes at sunrise, when the light highlights the peaks and creates dramatic colours. These photos remind me of the atmosphere and emotions I felt that day.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct statement of preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words like “because” or “so”. Avoid unclear or fragmented ideas and incorrect word choices (e.g. “crowded place” vs “less crowded”). Mention a concrete detail (fields, mountains, quiet villages) rather than vague lists. Limit to three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic. For instance, I like photographing green fields and small villages where there are fewer people and more natural details. This makes the photos feel peaceful and timeless.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and add one clear reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar (prepositions: “in other countries”, singular/plural) and avoid repetitive phrases. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example,” and keep the answer concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer taking pictures in other countries because the landscapes and cultures are often very different from what I know. For example, photographing a colourful market abroad captures unique activities and people that I can share with my family later.

× I like taking picture in different views.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views.

Use the plural 'pictures' when referring to taking photos in general, and include the preposition 'of' to indicate what the pictures depict. Suggestion: say 'taking pictures of different views.'

× I loving taking pictures.

✓ I love taking pictures.

'Loving' is a present participle and cannot stand alone as the main verb in this sentence. The correct simple present form 'I love' matches the habitual action. Suggestion: use 'I love taking pictures.'

× I loved taking, uh, pictures in different views.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views.

The student mixes past 'loved' with present context. Use simple present 'love' to express a general preference. Also remove filler 'uh' and add 'of' after 'pictures.' Suggestion: 'I love taking pictures of different views.'

× The mountain views are the air view.

✓ The mountain views are aerial views.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Air view' is not idiomatic; 'aerial view(s)' is the correct noun phrase. Also match plural 'views' with plural 'aerial views.'

× I want a different view.

✓ I want a different view.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. It correctly expresses a desire for a different view.

× Umm, it is a great memory, recalls and everything.

✓ Umm, it is a great memory and helps me recall everything.

'Recalls' as a noun is incorrect here. Use the verb 'recall' with 'helps me' to show function. The corrected sentence uses parallel structure: 'a great memory and helps me recall everything.'

× You want to take a picture and recall it for future.

✓ You want to take a picture and recall it in the future.

Use 'in the future' as the correct time expression. Also 'recall it' is acceptable but 'remember it in the future' is more natural. Suggestion: '...and remember it in the future.'

× I prefer views in rural areas because there is a crowded place, people are busy in their lives and recapturing that moment.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are less crowded, people are less busy, and you can capture that moment.

Original has contradictory and unclear ideas and wrong singular 'there is a crowded place' for 'rural areas.' Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'rural areas.' 'Recapturing' is wrong; use 'capture' for taking photos. Suggestion: contrast rural vs crowded urban areas clearly.

× We and the other peoples with us and the uh, whether the cars, the road, the wet Rd. rainy roads and the working shops and everything.

✓ We and the other people with us, the cars, the roads after rain, the shops at work, and so on.

Use 'people' not 'peoples' when referring to persons, and simplify the list with parallel nouns. 'Wet Rd.' is incorrect; use 'roads after rain' or 'rainy roads.' Keep parallel structure when listing items.

× I prefer in other countries because there are many different places that we have never seen.

✓ I prefer places in other countries because there are many different places that we have never seen.

The verb 'prefer' usually takes an object: 'I prefer places in other countries' or 'I prefer to visit other countries.' Adding 'places' clarifies the meaning.

× We want to capture that and we want to recall our memory in future.

✓ We want to capture that and recall the memory in the future.

Add 'in the' before 'future.' Use the noun phrase 'the memory' or 'our memories.' Also 'recall our memory' is awkward; 'recall the memory' or 'remember it' is better.

× We want to show them to our family, our members.

✓ We want to show them to our family members.

'Our members' is incorrect; combine into the compound noun 'family members.' This is the natural collocation.

× Like there is a many activities to capture to there is a very different feeling.

✓ There are many activities to capture, and there is a very different feeling.

Use plural verb 'are' with plural 'many activities.' Remove extra words 'a' before 'many.' Separate clauses with 'and.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'There are many activities.'