Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures. Correct grammar (use present simple/perfect), reduce fillers (umm, uh), and organize details with linking words (for example, recently, because). Be specific about what you photograph and when. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. Recently I took many photos of city skylines and coastal sunsets with my phone because it has a good camera. For example, two months ago I took a series of landscape shots during a weekend trip, which helped me practice composition.

Sugerencia: Answer directly which you prefer and give clear reasons using linking words (because, although, however). Avoid repeating and filler words. Use specific vocabulary (skyscrapers, architecture, countryside, landscapes) and provide one supporting example or comparison. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing urban areas because I enjoy capturing architecture, busy streets, and interesting lighting. However, I also like rural scenes for their natural landscapes and calm atmosphere; for instance, I often photograph city buildings at dusk and compare those with quiet village sunsets.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly (own country or other countries) and explain why with specific details and linking words (because, for example). Mention particular types of spots and a brief example of recent experience. Reduce fillers and correct grammar (e.g., 'they give us beautiful scenes'). Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it is accessible and I know many beautiful spots. For example, I often visit nearby villages to capture sunrise and sunset scenes, which offer vivid colours and peaceful landscapes that I find inspiring.

× Yes, I profound myself a good photographer umm, because I have a phone which is good in camera.

✓ Yes, I consider myself a good photographer, because I have a phone with a good camera.

The student used 'profound' incorrectly; 'profound' is an adjective meaning deep, not suitable for 'consider'. Also 'good in camera' is incorrect word order and preposition. Use the verb phrase 'consider myself' and the noun phrase 'a phone with a good camera' for correct adjective and preposition usage.

× Recently, two months ago, I take lot of beautiful pictures of the different view.

✓ Recently, two months ago, I took a lot of beautiful pictures of different views.

The time marker 'two months ago' requires past simple tense 'took' rather than 'take'. Also 'a lot of' needs 'a' and 'different view' should be plural 'different views' to match meaning.

× If the views are divert in quantity, uh, then you have so many things to capture in your camera.

✓ If the views vary in quantity, then you have many things to capture with your camera.

'Divert' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'vary'. 'So many things' is reduced to 'many things' for naturalness. 'In your camera' is wrong preposition; use 'with your camera'. Also 'views' plural is kept correct.

× Umm, well, it depends upon you, uh, what type of, uh, the area you like.

✓ Umm, well, it depends on you which type of area you like.

Use 'depends on' rather than 'depends upon you' for natural spoken English. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'area' and use 'which type of area you like' to form a correct clause. Present tense 'depends' is correct.

× Uh, according to me, I love to take photos in urban areas because there are so many, uh, good things.

✓ According to me, I love taking photos in urban areas because there are many interesting things.

'Love to take' is acceptable but 'love taking' is more natural. 'So many good things' is vague and awkward; 'many interesting things' is a clearer adjective choice.

× But uh, rural areas are best in, I think so because they have a beautiful natural sceneries, uh, rather than artificial sceneries so beautiful.

✓ But I think rural areas are better because they have beautiful natural scenery rather than artificial scenes.

Use comparative 'better' not 'best' when comparing two options. 'A beautiful natural sceneries' mixes articles and plural forms incorrectly; use uncountable 'scenery' or plural 'scenes'. 'Artificial sceneries so beautiful' is ungrammatical; reorder to 'artificial scenes'.

× As you know, currently I am living in my country.

✓ As you know, I am currently living in my country.

Place adverb 'currently' before the main verb phrase 'living' for natural word order: 'I am currently living'.

× So, uh, what is accessible to me that is my own country.

✓ So, what is accessible to me is my own country.

Remove the extra 'that' which makes the clause ungrammatical. No article change needed; correct structure is 'what is accessible to me is my own country'.

× I have some beautiful spots and areas here in my country.

✓ I have some beautiful spots and areas here in my country.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; plural 'spots and areas' matches 'some'. No change needed other than minor fluency improvements which are outside the requested correction types.

× I capture those pictures.

✓ I captured those pictures.

Context indicates past actions (talking about spots I have and pictures taken), so past tense 'captured' is more appropriate. Alternatively 'I take those pictures' would be present. The original simple present 'I capture' is unnatural here.

× Uh, especially the village areas are very beautiful, uh, natural nature wise because they are give us a beautiful scenes like sunset, sunrise.

✓ Especially the village areas are very beautiful in terms of nature because they give us beautiful scenes like sunsets and sunrises.

'Natural nature wise' is redundant; use 'in terms of nature' or 'naturally'. 'They are give us' is incorrect verb form; use 'they give us'. 'A beautiful scenes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'beautiful scenes' and pluralize 'sunset' and 'sunrise' as 'sunsets and sunrises'.