Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and use precise vocabulary (angles, photos).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing scenes from different angles, because it helps me notice details I might miss otherwise. For example, I often take wide shots to capture the whole landscape and close-ups to highlight textures, and later I review these photos on my phone when I have free time.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and add a reason or brief comparison using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use specific examples to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views. Urban scenes appeal to me because of the architecture and lively streets, while rural views are calming due to open fields and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy city skylines at night as well as quiet countryside sunsets.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, grammatically correct response with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to contrast preferences and avoid unfinished sentences. Mention particular places and what you like about them.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. At home I prefer places with green mountains and peaceful landscapes because they help me relax, while abroad I like visiting places such as the Emirates for their modern skyline and desert views. For example, the mountain trails near my town are soothing, whereas Dubai’s waterfront offers striking city vistas.

× Yes, my favorite habit is taking a picture from different angle so I can keep it in my phone and when I am free I watch this pictures.

✓ Yes, my favorite habit is taking pictures from different angles so I can keep them on my phone and when I am free I look at these pictures.

Errors: incorrect singular/plural nouns and incorrect pronouns and prepositions. 'taking a picture' should be 'taking pictures' to match general habit (plural). 'from different angle' should be 'from different angles' (plural). 'this pictures' is wrong: use plural demonstrative 'these pictures'. 'keep it in my phone' should be 'keep them on my phone' — use plural pronoun 'them' and correct preposition 'on' for storing files on a device. Also 'watch' is not the best verb for viewing photos; use 'look at'. Suggestion: use plural forms for habitual, match pronouns with nouns, and use correct prepositions for devices.

× Both. I like both of them, uh rural as well as the urban and I admire both views.

✓ Both. I like both rural and urban views, and I admire them both.

Errors: awkward structure and redundancy. 'both of them, uh rural as well as the urban' is disfluent and repeats 'both'. Simplify to 'both rural and urban views' and replace 'I admire both views' with 'I admire them both' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: combine parallel items into concise noun phrase and avoid redundant phrases.

× Both I prefer the views from my country in certain areas where there is a a relaxation where is the green Green Mountain and as well as I prefer from other country for example Emirate, I like the.

✓ Both. I prefer views in my country in certain areas where there is relaxation, such as the Green Mountain, and I also like views from other countries, for example the Emirates.

Multiple errors: repetition, article errors, word order, and incomplete sentence. 'Both I prefer' is awkward—start a new sentence. Remove duplicate 'a a' and capitalize properly. 'where is the green Green Mountain' has wrong word order and repetition; correct to 'such as the Green Mountain'. 'from other country' needs plural or 'other countries' and article 'the Emirates' for that place. The original ends abruptly 'I like the.' which is incomplete; complete the thought. Suggestions: break into clear clauses, fix article use ('the Emirates'), correct word order, and finish the sentence.