Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence saying that you enjoy taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons with correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also correct collocations: 'visit new places' or 'see new sights' instead of 'explore a new sightseeing.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember special places. For example, when I visit new cities like Paris or Berlin, I take photos of landmarks and street scenes so I can share them with friends and relive the trip later.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then support it with two specific reasons and one example. Avoid fillers ('uh', 'you know') and grammatical errors (use 'the countryside' and 'has' for singular). Use linking words like 'because' and 'whereas' to contrast.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because the countryside often has well-preserved historical sites and a stronger sense of local culture. For instance, when I visit a village, I enjoy traditional architecture and festivals, whereas cities can feel crowded and less authentic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and confidently without unnecessary apologies. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer views in other countries' and 'I enjoy meeting new people'). Provide one clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to structure your response.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because travelling abroad exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, exploring markets and historic neighborhoods in another country lets me try new foods and meet local people, which makes the trip more memorable.

× I haven't been to a lot of countries like Germany, France or England and every time I explore a new sightseeing I always like to take a photo of this to remember it to remember.

✓ I haven't been to many countries like Germany, France, or England, and every time I visit a new sight I like to take a photo to remember it.

Errors: 'a lot of countries' is acceptable but 'many countries' is more natural (quantifier issue, ID 14). 'Explore a new sightseeing' is incorrect: 'sightseeing' is an activity, not a countable noun; use 'visit a new sight' or 'see a new place' (sentence structure/word choice, ID 26). 'Take a photo of this to remember it to remember' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'take a photo to remember it' (sentence structure, ID 26). Also ensure tense and aspect: 'I haven't been to' (present perfect) correctly expresses experience up to now and 'every time I visit' uses present tense for habitual action (Present tense issue, ID 6). Suggestion: use 'many', 'visit a new sight', and remove repetition.

× I prefer rural areas cause countryside always have historical or uh, cultural things and urban areas always just like uh, you know, city and there are all.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the countryside always has historical or cultural features, while urban areas are more like cities and have different things.

Errors: 'cause' is informal; use 'because' (conjunction form, ID 16). 'countryside always have' shows subject-verb disagreement: 'countryside' is singular, so use 'has' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'historical or uh, cultural things' is vague; 'features' is clearer (word choice, ID 26). 'urban areas always just like ... city and there are all' is ungrammatical and unclear; restructure to 'urban areas are more like cities and have different things' (sentence structure, ID 26). Suggestion: use full conjunctions, match verb to subject, and rephrase unclear fragments.

× I just sorry for saying that I like other countries more 'cause you know, I grew up here, so I really like to explore new things and when I go to other countries I always have a good experience and meeting new people.

✓ I'm sorry for saying that I prefer other countries, because I grew up here. I like to explore new things, and when I go to other countries I always have good experiences and meet new people.

Errors: 'I just sorry for saying' is missing the verb 'am' (sentence without a verb/structure, ID 23/26); use 'I'm sorry'. 'like other countries more' is fine but 'prefer other countries' is more natural (word choice, ID 26). Using ''cause' is informal; use 'because' (conjunction, ID 16). 'I always have a good experience and meeting new people' mixes verb forms: 'have' followed by 'meeting' is incorrect; use parallel forms 'have good experiences and meet new people' (verb form consistency: Verb + -ing form vs infinitive/present, IDs 8 and 10). Also keep tense consistent: present simple for habitual actions (Present tense issue, ID 6). Suggestion: include missing verbs, use parallel structure, and prefer full conjunctions.