Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce fillers and give a clearer topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, state why photos matter to you (emotion or purpose), mention a typical subject you photograph and one platform or recipient. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines, then share the best shots on Instagram or send them to my family so they can see where I’ve been.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add linked, specific reasons and one example. Avoid vague words and minor pronunciation errors; mention a particular rural scene and contrast briefly with urban settings using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "whereas").

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery and peaceful sunsets. For instance, I like capturing fields and winding country roads, which feel more relaxing compared with busy urban streets.

Sugerencia: Make your topic sentence concise and avoid repetition. Give specific reasons and one clear example of what excites you abroad (architecture, landmarks, culture), and correct unclear phrases. Use a linking word to contrast home and abroad (e.g., "whereas"). Keep to three sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I find new architecture and cultural scenes more inspiring, whereas I feel I’ve already seen most places at home. For example, I love capturing London’s historic buildings and riverside views when I visit.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like uh, to see the memories in other views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like to see memories from different perspectives.

The original mixes 'like taking' (verb + -ing) correctly with an infinitive 'to see' but uses an unnatural noun phrase 'the memories in other views.' Use 'to see memories' (infinitive) OR 'seeing memories' (gerund) consistently. Also replace 'in other views' with the correct prepositional phrase 'from different perspectives' for clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: choose either 'I like taking... because I like to see...' or 'I like taking... because seeing...'.

× I usually share them on social media or send to my family or friends.

✓ I usually share them on social media or send them to my family and friends.

The verb 'send' requires an object; the pronoun 'them' (referring to pictures) must be repeated. Also use 'and' rather than 'or' because both recipients are likely intended. Suggestion: include the object after 'send' ('send them') and use 'and' when mentioning both groups.

× I personally prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I like natural scenery and sunsets.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I like natural scenery and sunsets.

The adverb 'personally' is redundant with 'I' and can be removed for conciseness. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammatical error. Suggestion: omit unnecessary adverbs to make speech clearer.

× I feel more relaxed because I live in Urbansi in Istanbul.

✓ I feel more relaxed because I live in Ümraniye in Istanbul.

'Urbansi' is likely a misspelling or incorrect form of a district name. If a proper noun is intended, use the correct spelling. If meaning 'urban area,' use 'an urban area in Istanbul.' Suggestion: confirm the intended word: for 'urban area' write 'an urban area in Istanbul'; for a district, write its correct name.

× I definitely prefer taking pictures in other countries because in my country I saw a lot of places, so now I don't feel excited when I see different places in my country.

✓ I definitely prefer taking pictures in other countries because I have seen a lot of places in my country, so now I don't feel excited when I see new places there.

The original mixes past simple 'saw' with the present context. Use present perfect 'have seen' to indicate past experiences relevant to the present. Also change 'different places in my country' to 'new places there' for naturalness. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experience (have seen) and keep tense consistent.

× But in other countries, especially in London, there are a lot of places to see and visits for everyone for trees.

✓ But in other countries, especially in London, there are many places to visit and see for everyone, including parks with trees.

The phrase 'places to see and visits for everyone for trees' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'places to visit and see' and restructure the clause about trees: for example 'including parks with trees.' Also replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for formality. Suggestion: reorder the sentence to 'there are many places to visit and see, including parks with trees.'