Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "try taking" not "try to taking"), and give one specific brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "for example").

Ejemplo: I do, I enjoy photographing scenes from different angles because each angle can change the mood or highlight new details. For example, shooting a building from ground level can make it look more dramatic, while a higher angle shows its surroundings.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete, grammatically correct answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid trailing off and use linking words ("because", "for instance"). Mention a concrete image or memory to make it vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they usually have more greenery and peaceful scenery. For instance, I like photos of winding country roads with small cottages and fields because they feel calm and timeless.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and be specific: use singular/plural correctly and avoid generalisations. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific, relevant example. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example", and avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., "if you travel to Japan").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they let me experience different cultures and scenery. For example, when traveling in Japan I enjoyed photographing people in traditional kimono and the architecture of shrines, which is very different from what I see at home.

× It might be somehow better or worse, but the point is we try to taking pictures from different views.

✓ It might be somehow better or worse, but the point is we try to take pictures from different views.

Error: incorrect use of the base verb after 'try to'. Rule: after 'try to' use the base form of the verb (infinitive without to is not used here because 'to' already present). Suggestion: use 'try to take' not 'try to taking'.

× I prefer views in rural areas compared to urban areas because rural areas often contain a lot of greenery and scenic view.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because rural areas often contain a lot of greenery and scenic views.

Errors: comparative construction and singular/plural. Use 'prefer A to B' instead of 'prefer A compared to B'. Also 'scenic view' should be plural to match 'a lot of' or use 'scenery'. Suggestion: say 'prefer ... to those in urban areas' and 'scenic views' or 'scenery'.

× For example, in rural areas there might be a small house or a.

✓ For example, in rural areas there might be a small house or a cottage.

Error: sentence incomplete and structure incorrect. The fragment 'or a.' is incomplete. Suggestion: complete the parallel item with a noun ('a cottage', 'a farm', etc.) so the sentence is grammatically complete and clear.

× I prefer view in other countries because you'll be able to discover a new culture.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because you'll be able to discover new cultures.

Error: noun number mismatch. 'View' should be plural to match general meaning, and 'a new culture' could be plural 'new cultures' when talking generally. Suggestion: use 'views' and 'new cultures' for general statements.

× For example, if you go travel to Japanese, you will be able to see and wear kimono rather than stay in your own country and where the familiar attire every day.

✓ For example, if you travel to Japan, you will be able to see people wearing kimono and try them on, rather than staying in your own country and wearing the same familiar clothes every day.

Multiple errors: 'go travel to' is ungrammatical—use 'travel to'. 'Japanese' is an adjective or noun meaning people; the country name is 'Japan'. 'See and wear kimono' is unclear—better 'see people wearing kimono and try them on'. 'Rather than stay ... and where the familiar attire every day' is ungrammatical; correct form 'rather than staying ... and wearing the same familiar clothes every day'. Suggestions: use proper verb forms, country name, and parallel gerund structures ('traveling', 'staying', 'wearing') to make the sentence grammatical and natural.