Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases, fix word order and articles, and add a brief specific detail. Use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Not really — I’m not keen on taking photos, but I enjoy admiring natural views. For example, I love watching the sun set behind the mountains on clear evenings because the colours are very calming.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency by removing fillers, correct minor grammatical issues and use a linking word to contrast ideas. Add a specific example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are more scenic and peaceful. For instance, I enjoy walking past agricultural fields and tree-lined roads, whereas urban areas are dominated by tall buildings and busy streets.

Sugerencia: Be careful with repetition and vocabulary (‘broaden my horizons’). Fix pronunciation/word errors (e.g., ‘Co countries’). Provide a concise reason and a specific example of what you want to see abroad.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I want to broaden my horizons and experience different landscapes. For example, I’d like to visit Norway to see fjords and dramatic coastal scenery that we don’t have at home.

× I enjoy myself having a nice evening in an with a nice weather around the mountains.

✓ I enjoy having a nice evening in good weather around the mountains.

The sentence has an incorrect reflexive use 'enjoy myself' and wrong article 'an' before 'with', also 'a nice weather' is uncountable so article 'a' is wrong. Based on 'Verb + -ing form' fix the verb phrase to 'enjoy having' (enjoy should be followed by a gerund). Remove 'myself' which is unnecessary. Replace 'in an with a nice weather' with 'in good weather' to use correct article/uncountable noun and correct preposition 'in'. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + gerund, avoid unnecessary reflexive pronouns, and use uncountable nouns without 'a'.

× The reason being in rural areas it offers more scenic views like uh, agricultural land, more trees, more greenery, while in urban areas all you see are tall buildings.

✓ The reason is that rural areas offer more scenic views, such as agricultural land, more trees and greenery, while in urban areas you mainly see tall buildings.

This sentence has a structural problem: 'The reason being' is a fragment; also subject-verb placement is incorrect ('in rural areas it offers' uses dummy 'it' causing agreement issues). Change to 'The reason is that' followed by a clause with correct subject 'rural areas' and verb 'offer'. Remove filler 'uh' and improve list punctuation. Suggestion: use complete clause 'The reason is that...' and ensure subject and verb agree.

× I would say in other countries because I think I have seen my own country and now I need to explore other options too.

✓ I would say other countries because I think I have seen my own country, and now I need to explore other options too.

The original had preposition 'in other countries' after 'say' which is awkward; better to say 'I would say other countries'. Tense usage 'have seen' is acceptable present perfect to express experience. Suggestion: place the object directly after 'say' and keep present perfect 'have seen' to indicate past experience with present relevance.

× I need to broaden my horizon and see what other Co countries could offer me.

✓ I need to broaden my horizons and see what other countries could offer me.

'Co countries' seems to be a typo; also 'horizon' is typically plural in this expression: 'broaden my horizons'. Fixing the typo and pluralizing 'horizons' makes the sentence idiomatic. Suggestion: use set phrase 'broaden my horizons' and remove stray characters.