Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeated fragments and incomplete sentences. Also use slightly wider vocabulary (e.g., "scenes" or "landscapes") and explain what you mean by "meaning" or "unique."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each scene tells a story. For example, city skylines can show human activity and architecture, while a quiet lakeside reveals peacefulness; both offer unique colors and moods that I try to capture.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer and give one clear reason with a concrete example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and complete your sentences. Avoid vague phrases like "my mind is being." Instead describe the feeling (e.g., relaxed, inspired).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For example, walking through a countryside field makes me feel relaxed and more creative, which helps me take calmer, more thoughtful photos.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and simply. State your current situation, then explain why with one specific reason. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repeated words and conditional confusion. If you haven't travelled abroad, say so clearly and give a reason why you prefer domestic views now.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know them better and feel connected to their history and landscapes. Since I haven't traveled abroad yet, I often choose familiar places where I can notice small cultural details and take meaningful photos.

× I like how beautiful.

✓ I like how beautiful they are.

The original sentence lacks a subject and pronoun to refer to 'views.' This is a pronoun omission error. Adding 'they are' makes the sentence complete and clearly refers to 'views.' Suggestion: include an explicit subject or pronoun when describing something (e.g., 'I like how beautiful they are').

× I like how beautiful they are in their own way.

✓ I like how beautiful they are in their own ways.

'They' refers to multiple views, so the phrase 'in their own way' should use the plural noun 'ways' to match. This is a pronoun/number agreement issue. Suggestion: ensure modifiers match the plurality of the noun (use 'ways' for multiple items).

× I like the meaning.

✓ I like the meaning of the scenes.

The sentence is vague and incomplete: 'the meaning' needs an object to show what meaning is liked. This is a sentence structure issue. Suggestion: make references specific by adding the noun being described (e.g., 'the meaning of the scenes' or 'the meanings behind them').

× I like how unique they are.

✓ I like how unique they are.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change; it clearly expresses that the views are unique. No further action required.

× Right now I prefer viewers in rural areas more because of how peaceful it is, how calm the environment is.

✓ Right now I prefer views in rural areas more because they are peaceful and the environment is calm.

The original uses 'viewers' (people who view) instead of 'views' (scenes), and mixes singular 'it is' with plural 'views.' This is an incorrect pronoun/noun choice and agreement error. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'views' and plural verbs or pronouns to match ('they are'). Simplify clauses for clarity ('they are peaceful and the environment is calm').

× And also I think whenever I saw environment, whenever I saw rural areas, it's like my mind is being.

✓ Also, whenever I see the countryside, it feels like my mind calms down.

Multiple issues: verb tense (saw→see), article missing before 'environment' and awkward phrase 'my mind is being.' This falls under preposition/article and sentence structure errors. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual preferences ('whenever I see'), include appropriate article ('the countryside' or 'the environment'), and replace vague expression with a clear verb phrase ('my mind calms down').

× I've never been in other countries yet, but I can say that I like it if I could here if I have been there but but right now I prefer my my own country's views.

✓ I've never been to other countries yet, but I can say I would like them if I could visit; for now I prefer my country's views.

Errors include wrong preposition ('been in'→'been to'), incorrect conditional/modal structure ('I like it if I could here if I have been there'), repeated words, and redundancy. This involves present perfect usage and modal/conditional clarity. Suggestion: use 'been to' with countries, express hypothetical with 'would' and 'if I could visit,' remove repetitions, and simplify the sentence to 'for now I prefer my country's views.'