Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, you know), correct verb forms, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what kinds of views you prefer and why. Use a linking word to connect ideas (for example, because, so, also).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. When I lived in New Zealand I visited many scenic spots, such as coastal cliffs and rainforests, and I took photos with both my phone and my DSLR. Because the light and colours there were amazing, I often spend time finding the best angles. Also, I enjoy sharing my photos with friends online.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence then support with specific reasons and an example. Correct grammar (there are → there are a lot of; use past tense correctly). Avoid trailing unfinished sentences and fillers. Use linking words like because and for example to structure the response. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery. For example, in New Zealand we often went to the beach with friends and had picnics, enjoying quiet views and clean air. This peaceful atmosphere helps me relax more than busy city landscapes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and complete the comparison. Remove fillers and correct grammar (there hasn't any beaches → there aren’t any beaches; I prefer to go near the ocean). Provide a clear preference or explain conditions with specific example and linking words (however, if). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the place; both have strengths. My hometown has beautiful mountains and rivers, but there aren’t any beaches. So, if I want to relax by the ocean, I prefer to visit other countries with coastlines; otherwise I enjoy staying in my country for mountain views.

× Yes, absolutely I do you know, since when I lived in New Zealand, I've been to lots of places, such a beautiful view and I always taking photos using my phone and also my personal umm professional camera and.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Since I lived in New Zealand, I have been to lots of places with such beautiful views, and I always take photos using my phone and my professional camera.

Problems: 6: Present tense issue (mixing 'I do' with time clause), 5: Past tense issue ("since when I lived" is incorrect with 'since'), 8: Verb + -ing form ("I always taking" should be 'I always take'), 13: Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ("such a beautiful view" should agree in number). Explanation: 'Since' with a past time needs a reference to a starting point or use present perfect continuous; here 'Since I lived' is awkward—use 'Since I lived in New Zealand' with present perfect 'have been' to show experience up to now. 'I always taking' is ungrammatical; use simple present 'I always take' for habitual actions. 'Such a beautiful view' should be plural 'such beautiful views' or 'such a beautiful view' with 'a' only if singular; context implies multiple views. Suggestion: Use consistent tense (present perfect for experiences up to now), correct verb forms for habits, and match noun number with modifiers.

× I definitely prefer rural areas. It is because in New Zealand there has a lots of beautiful nature. So for example I went to the beach with my friends and we usually take lots of food together and.

✓ I definitely prefer rural areas. It is because in New Zealand there is a lot of beautiful nature. For example, I went to the beach with my friends and we usually take a lot of food with us.

Problems: 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers ('a lots of' is wrong), 22: Article errors and 27: Subject-verb agreement ('there has' should be 'there is'). Explanation: 'There has' is incorrect; use 'there is' for singular uncountable 'a lot of nature' or 'there are' for plural nouns. 'A lots of' should be 'a lot of' or 'lots of' without 'a'. Also 'take lots of food together' is awkward; better 'take a lot of food with us' to indicate bringing food. Suggestion: Use 'there is' with uncountable nouns, 'a lot of' for quantity, and phrase 'with us' to indicate accompaniment.

× Umm, it depends on the place. Umm you know my hometown there has beautiful mountains and river but there hasn't any beaches. So if I would like to relax in the near the ocean I prefer.

✓ Umm, it depends on the place. My hometown has beautiful mountains and a river, but there aren't any beaches. So if I want to relax near the ocean, I prefer to go elsewhere.

Problems: 3: There be issue ('there has' and 'there hasn't any' are incorrect), 1: Singular and plural issue ('mountains and river' needs article 'a river'), 7: Future tense issue/conditional construction ('if I would like' is incorrect in this type of conditional), 26: Sentence structure errors (final clause incomplete). Explanation: Use 'my hometown has' rather than 'there has'; for absence use 'there aren't any beaches' for plural 'beaches'. 'River' as a singular count noun needs an article: 'a river'. In conditional sentences about preferences, use present simple 'if I want' not 'if I would like'. The final clause 'I prefer' needs an object or destination; thus 'I prefer to go elsewhere' or 'I prefer to relax by the ocean'. Suggestion: Use correct 'there is/are' forms, include articles for singular count nouns, use the present simple in real conditional clauses, and complete the sentence with a clear object or destination.