Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, make a clear topic sentence, use linking words and specific examples. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences. Replace filler words (uh, um) with short pauses. For example, say why you enjoy it and give one or two specific types of views you like.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they show many kinds of beauty. For example, I often photograph lush green valleys and rugged mountain ranges because their colors and textures change with the light.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear preference, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid contradicting statements and fix vocabulary errors (e.g., 'boat' likely wrong, buildings belong to urban areas). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' appropriately.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they often feature open landscapes and wildlife. For example, I enjoy quiet country roads and rice terraces, whereas urban views usually focus on tall buildings and busy streets.

Sugerencia: Give a concise main answer and then add one clear reason and a brief future possibility. Remove fillers and contradictory linking words ('but however'). Use one linking word to connect ideas and provide a specific example of what you like about your country.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy its unspoiled natural landscapes, such as coastal cliffs and tropical forests. However, I would like to visit foreign countries in the future to see famous sites like the Alps or ancient cities.

× Yes, I absolutely love to take, uh, photos of different views, uh, because it represents different kinds of beauties, uh, uh, and uh, and also we can see the different variations of beautiful greenery and, or landslide like hills, mountainous regions.

✓ Yes, I absolutely love taking photos of different views because they represent different kinds of beauty, and we can see various forms of beautiful greenery, such as hills and mountainous regions.

The original uses 'love to take' which is acceptable but 'love taking' is more natural when talking about a hobby; this relates to verb + -ing usage (ID 8) and present participle usage (ID 10). 'It represents' is singular but refers to 'photos' (plural), so it should be 'they represent' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'Kinds of beauties' is unidiomatic; use 'kinds of beauty' (article/word choice, ID 22/13). 'Different variations' is redundant and wordy; 'various forms' is clearer. 'Landslide like hills' is incorrect word order and form; 'such as hills and mountainous regions' is clearer (preposition and noun usage, ID 11). Overall suggestions: use plural agreement for plural subjects, prefer 'taking photos' for hobbies, avoid redundant modifiers, and use clear noun phrases such as 'forms of beauty.'

× Actually I love views of the boat, urban areas and rural areas because in urban areas we can see the local views or more natural beauty, but in rural areas you can see different big big uh buildings and many other things.

✓ Actually I love views of both urban and rural areas because in urban areas you can see local sights and more modern features, while in rural areas you can see natural beauty and wide open landscapes.

The phrase 'views of the boat, urban areas and rural areas' is unclear and includes an extra noun 'boat' that doesn't fit; pronoun and noun reference is incorrect (ID 12). The sentence also incorrectly contrasts urban and rural descriptions: it said urban areas show 'natural beauty' and rural areas show 'big buildings', which is likely reversed; this is a content clarity issue but also pronoun/reference misuse. 'We' and 'you' switch in the same sentence; keep consistent pronoun usage (ID 12). Rewriting with consistent 'you' and correct referents clarifies meaning. Suggestions: remove irrelevant words, maintain consistent pronouns, and match descriptions to the correct area (urban=modern/local sights, rural=natural landscapes).

× I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries, uh, because uh, I like to explore and experience the pure natural beauty of my own country, uh, but however, I would like to experience the uh, beauty of foreign country in the future if I get the chance.

✓ I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries because I like to explore and experience the pure natural beauty of my country, but I would also like to experience the beauty of foreign countries in the future if I get the chance.

The original uses 'prefer ... rather than' which is acceptable but 'prefer ... to' is more idiomatic when comparing preferences (ID 11). 'Other countries' needs comparison with 'those in other countries' to refer back to 'views' (pronoun/reference, ID 12). 'But however' is redundant; use 'but' or 'however' (conjunction error, ID 16). 'Beauty of foreign country' lacks article and number; use 'the beauty of foreign countries' or 'a foreign country' (article/number errors, ID 22 and 1). Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B', avoid redundant conjunctions, ensure pluralization or articles for 'country/countries', and keep pronoun references consistent.