Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: قلل الترددات واملأ الفراغات وابدأ بجملة موضوعية واضحة، ثم أضف تفاصيل محددة مرتبطة بالسبب أو المثال. ركز على تركيب جمل صحيحة واستخدم مفردات مناسبة (مثل "plants", "landscapes", "hobby") وتجنب التكرار. حاول ألا تزيد الإجابة عن 4 جمل وتستخدم روابط بسيطة مثل "because", "for example", أو "so" لتوضيح الفكرة.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography makes me feel relaxed. For example, I often photograph plants and close-up flowers because their colors and textures are fascinating. I usually take photos during morning light, so the images look calm and natural.

Sugerencia: ابدأ بالإجابة المباشرة ثم قدّم سببًا واضحًا مدعومًا بتفاصيل محددة أو مثال. تجنب التكرار والتلعثم واستخدم أدوات ربط مثل "because", "for example", أو "so". احرص على أن تكون الجمل مكتملة ومحددة (مثلاً: "I prefer rural areas because of their open fields and greenery").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery and peace. For example, I like walking in fields and photographing wildflowers and trees, which are rare in cities. This calm environment helps me focus on composition and lighting.

Sugerencia: أجب مباشرة وحدّد سببًا واضحًا مع أمثلة محددة بدلًا من كلِمات عامة وغير منسقة. تجنب التعبيرات العامية مثل "oh man" و"don't have that much". استخدم عبارات مترابطة: "I prefer... because... For example..." واذكر آراء محددة عن الفوارق بين المشاهد في بلدك وخارجها.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because they offer more variety in landscapes and architecture. For example, I enjoyed photographing coastal cliffs and modern skylines abroad, which are quite different from the traditional scenes at home. Therefore, traveling gives me more creative opportunities.

× Yes, I like it because uh, when I when I taking a picture, I feel happy.

✓ Yes, I like it because when I take a picture, I feel happy.

The phrase 'when I taking' is incorrect because after 'when' we need a finite verb form. Use the base form with the appropriate tense: 'when I take' for present habitual actions. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and remove filler words 'uh' and repeated fragments.

× I don't know why maybe this is this is my hobby and umm uh, especially I love taking photos for plants.

✓ I don't know why; maybe this is my hobby. I especially love taking photos of plants.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition 'for' with 'photos'. Use 'photos of plants'. Break into two sentences for clarity and move 'especially' before the verb phrase. Remove filler words.

× This is a breathtaking.

✓ This is breathtaking.

'Breathtaking' is an adjective that does not need the indefinite article 'a' when referring to something abstract or a view. Use 'This is breathtaking' for correct adjective use.

× To be honest, rural, uh, rural, rural areas, because the rural areas, uh, have a lot of breathtaking views like plants.

✓ To be honest, I prefer rural areas because they have a lot of breathtaking views, such as plants.

The original is repetitive and missing the subject 'I prefer'. Also 'like plants' is informal; 'such as plants' is more appropriate. Clean up repetition and include the subject to form a complete sentence.

× Uh, I don't know why, but when I love when I, when I see, uh, plants, I feel happy.

✓ I don't know why, but when I see plants, I feel happy.

The clause 'when I love when I, when I see' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use a single temporal clause 'when I see plants'. Keep simple present for habitual feelings.

× And this is and the color of.

✓ And I also like their colors.

The original is an incomplete sentence fragment. Provide a complete clause with subject and verb: 'I also like their colors.' Use 'their' to refer to plants.

× To be honest, oh man, don't have that much good views or breathtaking views at actually I prefer other side the another country's views because they have more than breathtaking views, not just traditional views.

✓ To be honest, my country doesn't have many good or breathtaking views. Actually, I prefer views in other countries because they have more breathtaking and diverse scenery, not just traditional views.

Multiple errors: missing subject 'my country', incorrect pluralization 'much good views' should be 'many good views', word order and extra fragments. 'Other side the another country's views' is ungrammatical; replace with 'views in other countries'. Use comparative phrasing 'more breathtaking and diverse scenery'. Split into two sentences for clarity.