Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and add a brief reason or personal detail to enrich the answer. Use one clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., because, for example). Avoid repeating similar adjectives like "fascinating" and "interesting."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenes. For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers because I like capturing dramatic light and reflections, which makes my photos more atmospheric.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with a specific detail and a linking word. Correct phrasing (e.g., "I find them calming") and reduce hesitation words like "well."

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel calmer than urban scenes. For instance, quiet fields and forests help me relax and I enjoy photographing peaceful landscapes without the distraction of traffic.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more fluent and specific: give a concise topic sentence, then add a concrete example or comparison. Fix grammar ("it has quite beautiful views"), avoid filler words, and mention a specific place or reason why you prefer your country.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to its landscapes. For example, the northern areas of Pakistan, such as Hunza and Skardu, have spectacular mountain scenery that I know well and enjoy photographing.

× Yes, I love to take pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

The verb following 'love' can be either the infinitive or the -ing form, but 'love taking' is the more natural collocation in this context. Using 'taking' sounds more fluent and idiomatic than 'to take'. Suggestion: use 'love taking' for habitual activities.

× I prefer to take photos of mountains, rivers and trees.

✓ I prefer taking photos of mountains, rivers and trees.

After 'prefer' both 'to' infinitive and '-ing' form are possible; however, when talking about general habits, the -ing form is more common ('prefer taking'). To be consistent with natural speech, use 'prefer taking'.

× Well, I prefer the views of rural areas, I find them quite interesting and a sense of calmness in it.

✓ Well, I prefer the views of rural areas; I find them quite interesting and calming.

The original sentence is a comma splice (two independent clauses joined by a comma) and contains awkward phrasing 'a sense of calmness in it.' Use a semicolon or separate sentences to fix the comma splice, and replace 'a sense of calmness in it' with the adjective 'calming' to describe 'views'. Also 'them' already refers to 'views', so avoid 'in it'.

× Well, there are many beautiful views in different countries, but Pakistan is also really famous for its mountains and its natural beauty.

✓ Well, there are many beautiful views in different countries, but Pakistan is also really famous for its mountains and natural beauty.

The original sentence is mostly correct but contains a minor redundancy 'its natural beauty' after already using 'Pakistan' as subject; dropping the second 'its' makes the phrase more natural. Subject-verb agreement is correct ('there are many'), so the change focuses on conciseness.

× So I prefer my own country and it has quite a beautiful views in the north side of Pakistan.

✓ So I prefer my own country; it has quite beautiful views in the northern part of Pakistan.

There is a singular/plural mismatch: 'a beautiful views' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'views'. Remove 'a' and use 'quite beautiful views'. Also 'north side of Pakistan' is awkward; 'northern part of Pakistan' or 'the north of Pakistan' is more natural. Use a semicolon or separate sentence to avoid run-on sentence.