Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid hesitation and small errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Remove filler words like "uh" and correct minor grammar errors (e.g., "it remains reminds us" → "they remind us").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they preserve special moments. For example, when my family visits a scenic hill station, I take landscape shots so we can remember the trip later.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer topic sentence and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to contrast preferences (e.g., "although" or "however") and correct agreement errors ("it has" → "each has" or "they each have"). Give one concrete example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views, although urban scenery also has its charm. Rural areas usually have more trees, lakes and open fields, so I find them more peaceful; for instance, I enjoy photographing a quiet lakeside at sunrise.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and be more specific. Start with a direct answer (e.g., "I prefer views in my country") then give two specific contrasting examples with brief details. Fix grammar issues ("which makes it ..." → "which are" or "which make them").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes. For example, Kerala has lush hills and waterfalls ideal for photography, while the northern mountain regions offer dramatic peaks and trekking routes.

× We usually don't go to this places, so uh, when we see those pictures, it remains reminds us of those moments.

✓ We usually don't go to these places, so when we see those pictures, they remind us of those moments.

Two issues: 'this places' is incorrect demonstrative + plural — should be 'these places' (singular/plural agreement with demonstrative). Also 'remains reminds' is redundant and ungrammatical; choose a single verb 'remind' that agrees with plural subject 'they'. Suggestion: Use the correct demonstrative for plural (these) and a single appropriate verb that matches the subject.' Note: This suggestion fixes both a singular/plural/demonstrative problem and a redundant verb causing sentence structure error.

× I like both the urban and rural views because it has its own significance, but I usually prefer rural views because it consists of many trees, lakes and water bodies which makes it beautiful.

✓ I like both the urban and rural views because they have their own significance, but I usually prefer rural views because they consist of many trees, lakes, and water bodies, which make them beautiful.

The sentence uses singular verbs ('has', 'consists', 'makes') with plural subjects ('views', 'rural views'). This is a subject-verb agreement error. Also 'it' should be 'they' when referring to plural 'views'. Suggestions: Use plural pronouns and plural verb forms to agree with plural nouns (they have, they consist, which make). Add commas for clarity and include the Oxford comma for lists if desired.

× My country has many beautiful places to visit. For example, Kerala has many beautiful mountains and waterfalls which makes it really beautiful.

✓ My country has many beautiful places to visit. For example, Kerala has many beautiful mountains and waterfalls, which make it really beautiful.

The clause 'which makes it really beautiful' treats 'mountains and waterfalls' (plural) as a singular subject. Change the verb to plural 'make' to agree with the plural antecedent. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive relative clause for correctness. Suggestion: Ensure the verb in the relative clause matches the plurality of its antecedent.

× In the north, we have mountains which makes it very beautiful and sightseeing places.

✓ In the north, we have mountains, which makes it a very beautiful sightseeing area.

The original mixes plural subjects and unclear references: 'mountains which makes it' uses singular verb 'makes' with plural 'mountains' (subject-verb agreement error). Also 'sightseeing places' is awkward after 'beautiful' and 'it' is vague. I changed 'it' to 'a very beautiful sightseeing area' for clarity and adjusted punctuation. Suggestion: Match verb number to subject and rephrase to clearly identify what 'beautiful' describes (the region/area rather than 'it').