Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ слишком разрозненный, содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Постройте ответ с чётким тематическим предложением, затем поясните причину и приведите пример. Используйте простые времена (present simple) и свяжите идеи союзами (because, so, for example). Устраните лишние фразы типа “I don't know”.

Ejemplo: I don't always take pictures of views because I only photograph places that resonate with me. For example, I might stop and take a photo when the light and colors create a strong mood. This way, my photos feel more personal and meaningful.

Sugerencia: Ответ неясен и перегружен заполнителями (uh). Улучшите связность: назовите предпочтение в начале, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретное сравнение между городом и деревней. Избегайте повторений и говорильных пауз.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but I slightly prefer rural areas because they often offer calmer scenes and natural light that work well in photos. In contrast, urban views can be interesting for architecture and street life, so I sometimes choose the city for variety.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении ("prefer you on", "resonate myself"). Он обрывается и не завершён. Сформулируйте утверждение явно, дайте причину и завершите мысль с примером воспоминания или чувства. Используйте правильные конструкции: "prefer ... to ...", "because".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country to those abroad because they evoke personal memories and familiar emotions. For example, when I look at photos of my hometown, I can recall specific moments and feel connected to those places.

× Not always. Like when I will find an good place, it's doesn't mean that I'm gonna take a picture.

✓ Not always. For example, when I find a good place, it doesn't mean that I'm going to take a picture.

The original sentence uses 'will' incorrectly in a subordinate time clause; English uses present simple (find) after time/connective words like 'when' to refer to future events. Also 'an good' is wrong article use before a consonant sound and 'it's doesn't' has incorrect auxiliary placement. Use 'a good' and 'it doesn't'. Use 'going to' instead of 'gonna' in formal speech. Suggestions: Use present simple after 'when' for future events (when I find), use correct article 'a', and correct negative contraction 'it doesn't'. Replace informal 'gonna' with 'going to'.

× That moment has to resonate with me, has to have something with me to have an picture.

✓ That moment has to resonate with me; it has to have something that connects with me to make a picture meaningful.

The phrase 'have something with me' is incorrect prepositional usage and 'an picture' is an article error; 'picture' begins with a consonant sound so use 'a'. The clause is also awkwardly structured. Better to say 'connects with me' and 'make a picture meaningful'. Suggestions: Use 'connect with' instead of 'have something with', use article 'a', and restructure sentence for clarity.

× I have a limits on that.

✓ I have limits on that.

Using the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'limits' is incorrect. Either use singular noun without 'a' ('I have a limit on that') or plural without 'a' ('I have limits on that'). Suggestions: Match article and noun number: 'a limit' or 'limits' without 'a'.

× I prefer both, as I said, the place has to resonate with me.

✓ I prefer both. As I said, the place has to resonate with me.

This sentence primarily needs punctuation correction to separate clauses; tense usage 'prefer' and 'has to resonate' is acceptable. However splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Suggestions: Use a period after 'both' to avoid run-on sentence.

× we can agree that some of the rural areas, uh, at the place where I live more, uh, great from the photo perspective of you.

✓ We can agree that some rural areas near where I live are better from a photographic perspective.

Multiple prepositional and word-order errors: 'some of the rural areas' is awkward — 'some rural areas' is preferred. 'At the place where I live more' is incorrect; use 'near where I live' or 'around where I live'. 'Great from the photo perspective of you' is ungrammatical; use 'better from a photographic perspective' or 'great for photography'. Suggestions: Use 'near/around where I live' and 'from a photographic perspective' or 'for photography'.

× I prefer you on my own country and my own place where I live because this the place that I can resonate myself with.

✓ I prefer my own country and the place where I live because it is a place I can resonate with.

'I prefer you on my own country' incorrectly uses 'you' and preposition 'on'. Should be 'I prefer my own country'. 'This the place' misses the verb 'is' and article usage; should be 'because it is a place'. 'Resonate myself with' is incorrect reflexive/pronoun usage; 'resonate with' takes an object, not a reflexive pronoun. Suggestions: Use correct subject/object pronouns, include the verb 'is', and use 'resonate with' without 'myself'.

× And when I'm looking back to the pictures, I wanna take that moment and deep dive in it and.

✓ And when I look back at the pictures, I want to relive that moment and dive deeply into it.

Use simple present 'I look' rather than progressive 'I'm looking' for habitual action. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'Take that moment and deep dive in it' is ungrammatical: 'relive that moment' or 'dive deeply into it' are correct. Preposition should be 'back at' rather than 'back to'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habits, avoid informal 'wanna', and use correct collocations: 'relive a moment' and 'dive into' with adverb 'deeply'.