Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear pronouns. Keep it to max 3–4 short sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "scenes," "memories").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture special moments. For example, I take photos of landscapes that move me or scenes that I want to remember later. This way, I can revisit those memories and share them with family.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then explain why with specific details and linking words. Avoid hesitations and fragmentary sentences. Use vocabulary like "countryside," "cityscapes," "atmosphere," and provide a brief example of each.

Ejemplo: I like both rural and urban views because each has a different appeal. For instance, countryside scenes are peaceful and full of nature, while cityscapes are lively and full of interesting buildings. So it depends on my mood and what kind of atmosphere I want.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you prefer views at home or abroad, then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "other places are" and complete your sentences. Use comparative language (e.g., "I prefer..., because..., whereas...").

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both in the Philippines and abroad, but I prefer visiting other countries for new scenery. For example, seeing different architecture or landscapes abroad gives me fresh perspectives, whereas views at home feel familiar and comforting.

× Yes, especially when it looks like they're they're special to me or they look static or even they took pictures for a memory so that they can remember everything that others more.

✓ Yes, especially when they look special to me, or when they capture a moment so I can remember things better than others.

Original sentence has repeated word 'they're they're' and unclear pronoun references. 'It looks like they're they're special to me' should use 'they' to refer to pictures and 'look' rather than 'looks' because 'they' is plural (Singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement). 'They look static' is awkward; use 'capture a moment' or similar. 'Even they took pictures for a memory so that they can remember everything that others more' is ungrammatical and unclear. I replaced it with 'when they capture a moment so I can remember things better than others' to clarify intent, use correct pronouns, and fix verb forms. Suggestion: keep pronoun number consistent, avoid repetition, and simplify clause structure. Note: This correction addresses pronoun misuse and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer both because some because I live in the. Rural place and sometimes I live in urban areas so it's up to me if it looks good or it makes me feel.

✓ I prefer both because sometimes I live in a rural area and sometimes I live in urban areas, so it depends on whether the view looks good or how it makes me feel.

Original sentence has fragmented and redundant phrases ('some because', stray period 'the. Rural place') and wrong article use ('the Rural place' should be 'a rural area'). The clause 'so it's up to me if it looks good or it makes me feel' is ungrammatical; use 'depends on whether' and 'how it makes me feel'. Suggestions: remove redundant words, use correct articles ('a rural area'), keep parallel structure ('sometimes... sometimes...'), and use 'depends on' for preference reasons.

× You know, I am in the Philippines, so other places are. And also the other countries also nice views but.

✓ You know, I am in the Philippines, but other countries also have nice views.

Original has sentence fragments ('so other places are.') and missing verb in 'other countries also nice views'. The correct construction requires the verb 'have' ('have nice views') and better conjunction use ('but' to contrast). Suggestion: combine into one clear sentence, include the verb, and avoid trailing conjunctions.