Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (possessive/plurals, articles) and avoid repetition. Use linking words if you add details (for example, because, for example).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural landscapes, because they are peaceful and full of color. For example, I like capturing mountains at sunrise and rivers in autumn to show their changing light and mood.

Sugerencia: Expand slightly with a reason and a specific example. Use a linking word (because or as) to connect your preference to the reason, keeping it within 1–2 sentences total.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because the scenery is calmer and more natural. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet fields and old trees that you rarely find in cities.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then add a specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating phrases like 'my country' and correct grammar (use 'has' not 'had', remove extra 'and').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to its landscapes and culture. For example, I often photograph the coastal cliffs near my hometown which remind me of local traditions and seasons.

× I love taking pictures in different places because I love nature's not only natures, but different kind of places that places that is beautiful and I can the static view.

✓ I love taking pictures in different places because I love nature. Not only natural landscapes, but different kinds of places that are beautiful and have interesting views.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and noun usage errors. 'nature's not only natures' is incorrect possessive/pronoun use; separate sentences improve clarity. 'different kind of places' should be 'different kinds of places' (plural noun after 'different'). 'that places that is beautiful' misuses pronouns and verb agreement; use 'places that are beautiful'. 'I can the static view' is ungrammatical; replace with 'have interesting views'. Suggest writing short, clear sentences and matching noun forms and verbs to their subjects.

× I prefer rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. 'Rural areas' correctly uses plural to match the general preference. No change needed.

× That's very good questions. I prefer the views in my own country because I love my own country and and my country had a very many beautiful places here.

✓ Those are very good questions. I prefer the views in my own country because I love it and my country has many beautiful places.

'That's very good questions' mixes singular contraction 'that is' with plural 'questions'; use 'Those are' or 'Those are very good questions'. Repetition 'my own country and and my country' is redundant; use 'I love it' or mention the country once. 'had a very many beautiful places here' uses incorrect tense and quantifier: use present tense 'has' for current facts, and 'many' without 'very' before it. Also remove 'here' unless emphasizing location. Suggest simplifying and keeping subject-verb agreement consistent.