Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and conciseness. Use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and errors (e.g., 'when capture moments', 'histo historic'), and keep answers within 3–4 well-linked sentences. Add one specific example to make content more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes. For example, I often photograph my dog when he plays in the garden because his expressions are very natural. I also like shooting rural landscapes to capture the peaceful fields, and historic buildings to show interesting textures and details.

Sugerencia: Correct verb tense and improve coherence by using linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons with specific details and a linking phrase such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they make me feel calm and relaxed. For instance, I enjoy photographing wildflowers and birds in the countryside, which helps me capture natural colors and quiet moments.

Sugerencia: Fix unclear phrasing and pronoun errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific contrasting example for domestic and foreign views. Avoid vague phrases like 'We use at home' and ensure sentences are grammatically correct and coherent.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but for different reasons. At home, familiar streets and family gatherings are comforting and full of personal memories; abroad, I focus on unique landmarks and architecture that reflect a different culture and history.

× they are expressive when capture moments.

✓ they are expressive when captured in moments.

The clause 'when capture moments' is missing the past participle; a passive meaning is intended so use 'captured'. Use 'captured' (past participle) after auxiliary or in passive constructions: 'when captured in moments'. This fixes verb form and makes the phrase grammatical. Suggestion: use 'when captured' or rephrase 'when they capture moments' if active voice is intended.

× I also enjoy photographing histo historic architecture for its details and textures.

✓ I also enjoy photographing historic architecture for its details and textures.

The word 'histo' is an accidental fragment before 'historic', creating a typo and adjective duplication. Remove the extra fragment so the adjective 'historic' correctly modifies 'architecture'. Suggestion: proofread to remove stray fragments.

× I love both of them, but generally I prefer rural areas because natural places gave me a comfort that makes me feel relaxed and I love taking pictures of flowers, trees and wildlife.

✓ I love both of them, but generally I prefer rural areas because natural places give me a comfort that makes me feel relaxed, and I love taking pictures of flowers, trees, and wildlife.

The clause used past tense 'gave' while the surrounding verbs are present (love, prefer, make). Use present tense 'give' to maintain consistent time reference. Also add a comma before 'and' in a compound sentence and serial comma for clarity. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent; change 'gave' to 'give'.

× We use at home are comforting and familiar and remind me of personal memory.

✓ The things I use at home are comforting and familiar and remind me of personal memories.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and has incorrect word order: 'We use at home' is unclear. Rephrase to 'The things I use at home' to provide a subject, and use plural 'memories' for natural collocation. This fixes sentence structure and subject clarity. Suggestion: identify the intended subject and reorder words into a standard subject-verb-object pattern.