Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and use smoother phrasing. Add one specific example to support your reason and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information more effectively. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures, I tend to recall the facts and the logic behind them later. As a result, I understand the material better than when I type notes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical response and clarify the device you use. Remove hesitations and organize thoughts into one clear sentence, then add a brief reason using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day, although I also have a laptop provided by my company. I prefer the desktop because its full-sized keyboard is more comfortable for long typing sessions.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid repetitive fillers. Start with a clear time reference and give one concise supporting detail about the context or frequency of practice.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in elementary school, when we had daily typing sessions in class. Practicing every day helped me build basic typing skills early on.

Sugerencia: Give a confident, clear description of your improvement method. Use a topic sentence, then add specific strategies and a linking word to show structure (e.g., 'for example' or 'so'). Avoid negative hedging like 'I don't think I'm better.'

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly. For example, I type every day on both desktop and laptop keyboards, and I focus on correcting my mistakes and increasing speed using online typing exercises.

× This is because by writing by your hand, you memorize the facts and logic, and you can better understand what you're writing than typing.

✓ This is because when you write by hand, you remember the facts and logic better, and you can understand what you are writing more than when typing.

Incorrect phrase 'by writing by your hand' uses awkward preposition and form; 'when you write by hand' is the correct structure. 'Memorize' is acceptable but 'remember' is more natural in this context. Also comparative order 'understand what you are writing more than when typing' clarifies comparison. Suggestion: use 'write by hand' and place comparatives clearly.

× Yes, I type on uh, desktop keyboard every day I have a laptop.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day; I also have a laptop.

Missing definite/indefinite article before 'desktop keyboard'—English requires 'a desktop keyboard'. The original also had a run-on sentence; separating with a semicolon or period clarifies meaning. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') and use proper sentence boundaries.

× Blended by my company, but I prefer typing on a keyboard.

✓ My company provided both, but I prefer typing on a desktop keyboard.

Fragment: 'Blended by my company, but I prefer...' is not a complete sentence and 'blended' is unclear. Reword to a full sentence explaining that the company provided options. Suggestion: use a clear subject and verb ('My company provided both') and avoid dangling participles.

× I don't remember exactly, but I guess it was in my elementary school years that I learned to type.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I guess I learned to type during my elementary school years.

Awkward clause 'it was in my elementary school years that I learned to type' is grammatical but wordy. More natural: 'I learned to type during my elementary school years.' Tense is past simple and appropriate; suggestion: simplify word order for clarity.

× My class had uh, uh, typing session every day, so we learned as a child to type on a computer keyboard.

✓ My class had typing sessions every day, so we learned as children to type on a computer keyboard.

Missing plural and article: 'typing session every day' should be 'typing sessions every day' or 'a typing session every day'. 'As a child' is singular while 'we' is plural—use 'as children'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches subject and maintain number agreement.

× I don't think I'm better getting better at typing, but I usually learn by doing.

✓ I don't think I'm getting better at typing, but I usually learn by doing.

Redundant and incorrect phrase 'I'm better getting better' mixes 'better' and progressive form. Correct is 'I'm getting better'. Suggestion: avoid duplication and use present continuous correctly for ongoing improvement.

× I type on a desktop keyboard or a laptop keyboard every day, so when I make a mistake I try to correct it and type faster.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard or a laptop keyboard every day, so when I make a mistake I try to correct it and then type faster.

Original is mostly fine but adding 'then' improves sequence clarity. No major grammar error, but small adverb placement helps convey order. Suggestion: use sequence adverbs like 'then' to clarify actions.